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authorDavid Bryant <david@davidcbryant.net>2022-12-21 10:18:58 -0600
committerDavid Bryant <david@davidcbryant.net>2022-12-21 10:18:58 -0600
commitc30b3ccf262e52464a6aba15de0f42990de2e1d4 (patch)
tree772098d2ea815b4287052ece6e1ad68f599b09af
parent9c753b58f1db4267ee47a990b118782773dedd96 (diff)
Remove redundant verbiage and clarify a few things.
-rw-r--r--chapter09/introduction.xml16
1 files changed, 8 insertions, 8 deletions
diff --git a/chapter09/introduction.xml b/chapter09/introduction.xml
index da5ffe67c..745ca3165 100644
--- a/chapter09/introduction.xml
+++ b/chapter09/introduction.xml
@@ -11,19 +11,19 @@
<title>Introduction</title>
<para>Booting a Linux system involves several tasks. The process must
- mount both virtual and real file systems, initialize devices, activate swap,
- check file systems for integrity, mount any swap partitions or files, set
+ mount both virtual and real file systems, initialize devices,
+ check file systems for integrity, mount and activate any swap partitions or files, set
the system clock, bring up networking, start any daemons required by the
- system, and accomplish any other custom tasks needed by the user. This
+ system, and accomplish any other custom tasks specified by the user. This
process must be organized to ensure the tasks are performed in the correct
- order but, at the same time, be executed as fast as possible.</para>
+ order and executed as quickly as possible.</para>
<sect2 id='sysv-desc'>
<title>System V</title>
<para>System V is the classic boot process that has been used in Unix and
Unix-like systems such as Linux since about 1983. It consists of a small
- program, <command>init</command>, that sets up basic programs such as
+ program, <command>init</command>, that sets up basic processes such as
<command>login</command> (via getty) and runs a script. This script,
usually named <command>rc</command>, controls the execution of a set of
additional scripts that perform the tasks required to initialize the
@@ -31,7 +31,7 @@
<para>The <command>init</command> program is controlled by the
<filename>/etc/inittab</filename> file and is organized into run levels that
- can be run by the user. In LFS, they are used as follows:</para>
+ can be chosen by the user. In LFS, they are used as follows:</para>
<literallayout>0 &mdash; halt
1 &mdash; Single user mode
@@ -70,13 +70,13 @@
<listitem>
<para>Serial processing of boot tasks. This is related to the previous
- point. A delay in any process such as a file system check, will
+ point. A delay in any process, such as a file system check, will
delay the entire boot process.</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>Does not directly support advanced features like
- control groups (cgroups), and per-user fair share scheduling.</para>
+ control groups (cgroups) and per-user fair share scheduling.</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>