Merge branch 'trunk' of git.linuxfromscratch.org:lfs into trunk

1 files changed, 15 insertions, 14 deletions

diff --git a/chapter09/profile.xml b/chapter09/profile.xml
index e47153830..1b87632f7 100644
--- a/chapter09/profile.xml
+++ b/chapter09/profile.xml
@@ -16,10 +16,10 @@
 
   <para>The shell program <command>/bin/bash</command> (hereafter referred to
   as <quote>the shell</quote>) uses a collection of startup files to help
-  create an environment to run in. Each file has a specific use and may affect
+  create the environment to run in. Each file has a specific use and may affect
   login and interactive environments differently. The files in the <filename
-  class="directory">/etc</filename> directory provide global settings. If an
-  equivalent file exists in the home directory, it may override the global
+  class="directory">/etc</filename> directory provide global settings. If
+  equivalent files exist in the home directory, they may override the global
   settings.</para>
 
   <para>An interactive login shell is started after a successful login, using
@@ -30,8 +30,9 @@
   because it is processing a script and not waiting for user input between
   commands.</para>
 
-  <para>For more information, see <command>info bash</command> under the
-  <emphasis>Bash Startup Files and Interactive Shells</emphasis> section.</para>
+<para>For more information, see the <emphasis>Bash Startup Files</emphasis> and
+  <emphasis>Interactive Shells</emphasis> sections in the <emphasis>Bash 
+  Features</emphasis> chapter of the Bash info pages (<command>info bash</command>).</para>
 
   <para>The files <filename>/etc/profile</filename> and
   <filename>~/.bash_profile</filename> are read when the shell is
@@ -91,8 +92,8 @@
 <screen><computeroutput>ISO-8859-1</computeroutput></screen>
 
   <para>This results in a final locale setting of <quote>en_GB.ISO-8859-1</quote>.
-  It is important that the locale found using the heuristic above is tested prior
-  to it being added to the Bash startup files:</para>
+  It is important that the locale found using the heuristic above is tested before
+  it is added to the Bash startup files:</para>
 
 <screen role="nodump"><userinput>LC_ALL=&lt;locale name&gt; locale language
 LC_ALL=&lt;locale name&gt; locale charmap
@@ -129,9 +130,9 @@ LC_ALL=&lt;locale name&gt; locale int_prefix</userinput></screen>
   For example, one would have to change "de_DE.ISO-8859-15@euro" to
   "de_DE@euro" in order to get this locale recognized by Xlib.</para>
 -->
-  <para>Other packages can also function incorrectly (but may not necessarily
+  <para>Other packages may also function incorrectly (but will not necessarily
   display any error messages) if the locale name does not meet their expectations.
-  In those cases, investigating how other Linux distributions support your locale
+  In such cases, investigating how other Linux distributions support your locale
   might provide some useful information.</para>
 
   <para>Once the proper locale settings have been determined, create the
@@ -147,16 +148,16 @@ EOF</userinput></screen>
 
   <para>The <quote>C</quote> (default) and <quote>en_US.utf8</quote> (the recommended
   one for United States English users) locales are different. <quote>C</quote>
-  uses the US-ASCII 7-bit character set, and treats bytes with the high bit set
-  as invalid characters. That's why, e.g., the <command>ls</command> command
-  substitutes them with question marks in that locale. Also, an attempt to send
+  uses the US-ASCII 7-bit character set, and treats bytes with the high-order bit set
+  <quote>on</quote> as invalid characters. That's why, e.g., the <command>ls</command> command
+  displays them as question marks in that locale. Also, an attempt to send
   mail with such characters from Mutt or Pine results in non-RFC-conforming
   messages being sent (the charset in the outgoing mail is indicated as <quote>unknown
-  8-bit</quote>). So you can use the <quote>C</quote> locale only if you are sure that
+  8-bit</quote>). So you can only use the <quote>C</quote> locale if you are sure
   you will never need 8-bit characters.</para>
 
   <para>UTF-8 based locales are not supported well by some programs.
-  Work is in progress to document and, if possible, fix such problems, see
+  Work is in progress to document and, if possible, fix such problems. See
   <ulink url="&blfs-book;introduction/locale-issues.html"/>.</para>
 
 </sect1>