Misc edits

git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/branches/6.0/BOOK@4272 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

4 files changed, 24 insertions, 24 deletions

diff --git a/chapter06/gzip.xml b/chapter06/gzip.xml
index 26b30ee47..bdb9a6f3b 100644
--- a/chapter06/gzip.xml
+++ b/chapter06/gzip.xml
@@ -75,7 +75,7 @@ zegrep, zfgrep, zforce, zgrep, zless, zmore, and znew</seg></seglistitem>
 <varlistentry id="gunzip">
 <term><command>gunzip</command></term>
 <listitem>
-<para>decompresses gzipped files</para>
+<para>Decompresses gzipped files</para>
 <indexterm zone="ch-system-gzip gunzip"><primary sortas="b-gunzip">gunzip</primary></indexterm>
 </listitem>
 </varlistentry>
@@ -83,7 +83,7 @@ zegrep, zfgrep, zforce, zgrep, zless, zmore, and znew</seg></seglistitem>
 <varlistentry id="gzexe">
 <term><command>gzexe</command></term>
 <listitem>
-<para>creates self-uncompressing executable files</para>
+<para>Creates self-uncompressing executable files</para>
 <indexterm zone="ch-system-gzip gzexe"><primary sortas="b-gzexe">gzexe</primary></indexterm>
 </listitem>
 </varlistentry>
@@ -91,7 +91,7 @@ zegrep, zfgrep, zforce, zgrep, zless, zmore, and znew</seg></seglistitem>
 <varlistentry id="gzip">
 <term><command>gzip</command></term>
 <listitem>
-<para>compresses the given files using Lempel-Ziv (LZ77) coding</para>
+<para>Compresses the given files using Lempel-Ziv (LZ77) coding</para>
 <indexterm zone="ch-system-gzip gzip"><primary sortas="b-gzip">gzip</primary></indexterm>
 </listitem>
 </varlistentry>
@@ -100,14 +100,14 @@ zegrep, zfgrep, zforce, zgrep, zless, zmore, and znew</seg></seglistitem>
 <term><command>uncompress</command></term>
 <listitem>
 <para>Decompresses compressed files</para>
-<indexterm zone="ch-system-gzip znew"><primary sortas="b-znew">znew</primary></indexterm>
+<indexterm zone="ch-system-gzip uncompress"><primary sortas="b-uncompress">uncompress</primary></indexterm>
 </listitem>
 </varlistentry>
 
 <varlistentry id="zcat">
 <term><command>zcat</command></term>
 <listitem>
-<para>uncompresses the given gzipped files to standard output</para>
+<para>Uncompresses the given gzipped files to standard output</para>
 <indexterm zone="ch-system-gzip zcat"><primary sortas="b-zcat">zcat</primary></indexterm>
 </listitem>
 </varlistentry>
@@ -115,7 +115,7 @@ zegrep, zfgrep, zforce, zgrep, zless, zmore, and znew</seg></seglistitem>
 <varlistentry id="zcmp">
 <term><command>zcmp</command></term>
 <listitem>
-<para>runs <command>cmp</command> on gzipped files</para>
+<para>Runs <command>cmp</command> on gzipped files</para>
 <indexterm zone="ch-system-gzip zcmp"><primary sortas="b-zcmp">zcmp</primary></indexterm>
 </listitem>
 </varlistentry>
@@ -123,7 +123,7 @@ zegrep, zfgrep, zforce, zgrep, zless, zmore, and znew</seg></seglistitem>
 <varlistentry id="zdiff">
 <term><command>zdiff</command></term>
 <listitem>
-<para>runs <command>diff</command> on gzipped files</para>
+<para>Runs <command>diff</command> on gzipped files</para>
 <indexterm zone="ch-system-gzip zdiff"><primary sortas="b-zdiff">zdiff</primary></indexterm>
 </listitem>
 </varlistentry>
@@ -131,7 +131,7 @@ zegrep, zfgrep, zforce, zgrep, zless, zmore, and znew</seg></seglistitem>
 <varlistentry id="zegrep">
 <term><command>zegrep</command></term>
 <listitem>
-<para>runs <command>egrep</command> on gzipped files</para>
+<para>Runs <command>egrep</command> on gzipped files</para>
 <indexterm zone="ch-system-gzip zegrep"><primary sortas="b-zegrep">zegrep</primary></indexterm>
 </listitem>
 </varlistentry>
@@ -139,7 +139,7 @@ zegrep, zfgrep, zforce, zgrep, zless, zmore, and znew</seg></seglistitem>
 <varlistentry id="zfgrep">
 <term><command>zfgrep</command></term>
 <listitem>
-<para>runs <command>fgrep</command> on gzipped files</para>
+<para>Runs <command>fgrep</command> on gzipped files</para>
 <indexterm zone="ch-system-gzip zfgrep"><primary sortas="b-zfgrep">zfgrep</primary></indexterm>
 </listitem>
 </varlistentry>
@@ -147,7 +147,7 @@ zegrep, zfgrep, zforce, zgrep, zless, zmore, and znew</seg></seglistitem>
 <varlistentry id="zforce">
 <term><command>zforce</command></term>
 <listitem>
-<para>forces a <filename class="extension">.gz</filename> extension on all given files
+<para>Forces a <filename class="extension">.gz</filename> extension on all given files
 that are gzipped files, so that <command>gzip</command> will not compress them again; this can be
 useful when file names were truncated during a file transfer</para>
 <indexterm zone="ch-system-gzip zforce"><primary sortas="b-zforce">zforce</primary></indexterm>
@@ -157,7 +157,7 @@ useful when file names were truncated during a file transfer</para>
 <varlistentry id="zgrep">
 <term><command>zgrep</command></term>
 <listitem>
-<para>runs <command>grep</command> on gzipped files</para>
+<para>Runs <command>grep</command> on gzipped files</para>
 <indexterm zone="ch-system-gzip zgrep"><primary sortas="b-zgrep">zgrep</primary></indexterm>
 </listitem>
 </varlistentry>
@@ -165,7 +165,7 @@ useful when file names were truncated during a file transfer</para>
 <varlistentry id="zless">
 <term><command>zless</command></term>
 <listitem>
-<para>runs <command>less</command> on gzipped files</para>
+<para>Runs <command>less</command> on gzipped files</para>
 <indexterm zone="ch-system-gzip zless"><primary sortas="b-zless">zless</primary></indexterm>
 </listitem>
 </varlistentry>
@@ -173,7 +173,7 @@ useful when file names were truncated during a file transfer</para>
 <varlistentry id="zmore">
 <term><command>zmore</command></term>
 <listitem>
-<para>runs <command>more</command> on gzipped files</para>
+<para>Runs <command>more</command> on gzipped files</para>
 <indexterm zone="ch-system-gzip zmore"><primary sortas="b-zmore">zmore</primary></indexterm>
 </listitem>
 </varlistentry>
@@ -181,7 +181,7 @@ useful when file names were truncated during a file transfer</para>
 <varlistentry id="znew">
 <term><command>znew</command></term>
 <listitem>
-<para>re-compresses files from <command>compress</command> format to
+<para>Re-compresses files from <command>compress</command> format to
 <command>gzip</command> format&mdash;<filename class="extension">.Z</filename>
 to <filename class="extension">.gz</filename></para>
 <indexterm zone="ch-system-gzip znew"><primary sortas="b-znew">znew</primary></indexterm>
diff --git a/chapter06/udev.xml b/chapter06/udev.xml
index c1181a96b..d1159a9bf 100644
--- a/chapter06/udev.xml
+++ b/chapter06/udev.xml
@@ -70,7 +70,7 @@ cp ../udev-config-1.rules /etc/udev/rules.d/25-lfs.rules</userinput></screen>
 <varlistentry id="udev">
 <term><command>udev</command></term>
 <listitem>
-<para>creates device nodes in <filename
+<para>Creates device nodes in <filename
 class="directory">/dev</filename> or renames network interfaces (not
 in LFS) in response to hotplug events</para>
 <indexterm zone="ch-system-udev udev"><primary sortas="b-udev">udev</primary></indexterm>
@@ -79,7 +79,7 @@ in LFS) in response to hotplug events</para>
 <varlistentry id="udevd">
 <term><command>udevd</command></term>
 <listitem>
-<para>a daemon that reorders hotplug events before submitting them to
+<para>A daemon that reorders hotplug events before submitting them to
 <command>udev</command>,
 thus avoiding various race conditions</para>
 <indexterm zone="ch-system-udev udevd"><primary sortas="b-udevd">udevd</primary></indexterm>
@@ -88,14 +88,14 @@ thus avoiding various race conditions</para>
 <varlistentry id="udevsend">
 <term><command>udevsend</command></term>
 <listitem>
-<para>delivers hotplug events to <command>udevd</command></para>
+<para>Delivers hotplug events to <command>udevd</command></para>
 <indexterm zone="ch-system-udev udevsend"><primary sortas="b-udevsend">udevsend</primary></indexterm>
 </listitem></varlistentry>
 
 <varlistentry id="udevstart">
 <term><command>udevstart</command></term>
 <listitem>
-<para>creates device nodes in <filename
+<para>Creates device nodes in <filename
 class="directory">/dev</filename> that correspond to drivers compiled directly
 into the kernel; it performs that task by simulating hotplug events presumably
 dropped by the kernel before invocation of this program (e.g., because the root
@@ -108,7 +108,7 @@ to <command>udev</command></para>
 <varlistentry id="udevinfo">
 <term><command>udevinfo</command></term>
 <listitem>
-<para>allows users to query the <command>udev</command> database for
+<para>Allows users to query the <command>udev</command> database for
 information on any device currently present on the system; it also
 provides a way to query any device in the <systemitem
 class="filesystem">sysfs</systemitem> tree to help create udev
@@ -119,7 +119,7 @@ rules</para>
 <varlistentry id="udevtest">
 <term><command>udevtest</command></term>
 <listitem>
-<para>simulates a <command>udev</command> run for the given device,
+<para>Simulates a <command>udev</command> run for the given device,
 and prints out the name of the node the real <command>udev</command> would
 have created or (not in LFS) the name of the renamed network interface</para>
 <indexterm zone="ch-system-udev udevtest"><primary sortas="b-udevtest">udevtest</primary></indexterm>
@@ -128,7 +128,7 @@ have created or (not in LFS) the name of the renamed network interface</para>
 <varlistentry id="etc-udev">
 <term><filename class="directory">/etc/udev</filename></term>
 <listitem>
-<para>contains <command>udev</command> configuation files,
+<para>Contains <command>udev</command> configuation files,
 device permissions, and rules for device naming</para>
 <indexterm zone="ch-system-udev etc-udev"><primary sortas="e-etc-udev">/etc/udev</primary></indexterm>
 </listitem></varlistentry>
diff --git a/chapter07/udev.xml b/chapter07/udev.xml
index ff3da37f8..bdcf55d7b 100644
--- a/chapter07/udev.xml
+++ b/chapter07/udev.xml
@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@ used in negligable.</para>
 <sect2>
 <title>History</title>
 
-<para>In Febraury 2000, a new filesystem called <systemitem
+<para>In February 2000, a new filesystem called <systemitem
 class="filesystem">devfs</systemitem> was merged into the 2.3.46
 kernel and was made available during the 2.4 series of
 stable kernels.  Although it was present in the kernel source itself,
diff --git a/general.ent b/general.ent
index ccec8dc05..542f0b083 100644
--- a/general.ent
+++ b/general.ent
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="ISO-8859-1"?>
-<!ENTITY version "6.0-testing-20041006">
+<!ENTITY version "6.0">
 <!ENTITY releasedate "October 06, 2004">
 
 <!ENTITY lfs-root "http://www.linuxfromscratch.org/">
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
 <!ENTITY faq-root "&lfs-root;faq/">
 <!ENTITY hints-root "&lfs-root;hints/downloads/files/">
 <!ENTITY hints-index "&lfs-root;hints/list.html">
-<!ENTITY patches-root "&lfs-root;patches/lfs/cvs/testing/">
+<!ENTITY patches-root "&lfs-root;patches/lfs/&version;/">
 <!ENTITY wiki-root "http://wiki.linuxfromscratch.org/">
 <!ENTITY freshmeat "http://freshmeat.net/projects/">