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authorMatthew Burgess <matthew@linuxfromscratch.org>2006-05-30 17:06:37 +0000
committerMatthew Burgess <matthew@linuxfromscratch.org>2006-05-30 17:06:37 +0000
commit00e4c9a31a282bfab22958a397b23d0515ea752d (patch)
tree63716500443b5260b540fc221e07199946a33148
parentec20811ee7ea3af328207b72144049d17e44f86d (diff)
Textual corrections from Chris Staub - dependency information is now in the appendix, not in chapter 6. Specific compiler optimisations are not provided so remove mentioning them.
git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@7635 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689
-rw-r--r--chapter06/introduction.xml11
-rw-r--r--general.ent4
2 files changed, 7 insertions, 8 deletions
diff --git a/chapter06/introduction.xml b/chapter06/introduction.xml
index 588d84780..1a5e0aae4 100644
--- a/chapter06/introduction.xml
+++ b/chapter06/introduction.xml
@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@
followed by concise descriptions of each program and library the package
installed.</para>
- <para>If using the compiler optimizations provided in this chapter, please
+ <para>If using compiler optimizations, please
review the optimization hint at <ulink url="&hints-root;optimization.txt"/>.
Compiler optimizations can make a program run slightly faster, but they may
also cause compilation difficulties and problems when running the program.
@@ -49,10 +49,9 @@
<para>Before the installation instructions, each installation page provides
information about the package, including a concise description of what it
- contains, approximately how long it will take to build, how much disk space
- is required during this building process, and any other packages needed to
- successfully build the package. Following the installation instructions,
- there is a list of programs and libraries (along with brief descriptions of
- these) that the package installs.</para>
+ contains, approximately how long it will take to build, and how much disk
+ space is required during this building process. Following the installation
+ instructions, there is a list of programs and libraries (along with brief
+ descriptions of these) that the package installs.</para>
</sect1>
diff --git a/general.ent b/general.ent
index 449b985ba..e593fc341 100644
--- a/general.ent
+++ b/general.ent
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
<?xml version="1.0" encoding="ISO-8859-1"?>
-<!ENTITY version "SVN-20060528">
-<!ENTITY releasedate "May 28, 2006">
+<!ENTITY version "SVN-2006030">
+<!ENTITY releasedate "May 30, 2006">
<!ENTITY milestone "6.2">
<!ENTITY generic-version "development"> <!-- Use "development", "testing", or "x.y[-pre{x}]" -->