Various minor text changes.

git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@8903 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

6 files changed, 14 insertions, 8 deletions

diff --git a/chapter01/changelog.xml b/chapter01/changelog.xml
index 34d82eb82..45bcdb113 100644
--- a/chapter01/changelog.xml
+++ b/chapter01/changelog.xml
@@ -41,6 +41,11 @@
       <para>2009-05-23</para>
       <itemizedlist>
         <listitem>
+          <para>[bdubbs] - Various minor text changes.  Thanks to Chris
+          Staub. Fixes
+          <ulink url="&lfs-ticket-root;2407">#2407</ulink>.</para>
+        </listitem>
+        <listitem>
           <para>[bdubbs] - Change the bootsripts and udev configuration
           so the rtc is set by udev upon boot. Removed aio device
           from udev configuration.  Fixes
diff --git a/chapter05/binutils-pass1.xml b/chapter05/binutils-pass1.xml
index eff3eac76..3ab5a3c03 100644
--- a/chapter05/binutils-pass1.xml
+++ b/chapter05/binutils-pass1.xml
@@ -77,9 +77,9 @@ cd ../binutils-build</userinput></screen>
         <listitem>
           <para>Because the machine description in the <envar>LFS_TGT</envar>
           variable is slightly different than the value returned by the
-          config.guess script, this switch will tell the configure script to
-          adjust Binutil's build system for building a cross linker.
-          </para>
+          <command>config.guess</command> script, this switch will tell the
+          <command>configure</command> script to adjust Binutil's build system
+          for building a cross linker.  </para>
         </listitem>
       </varlistentry>
 
diff --git a/chapter05/e2fsprogs.xml b/chapter05/e2fsprogs.xml
index 38919deb7..43cea7558 100644
--- a/chapter05/e2fsprogs.xml
+++ b/chapter05/e2fsprogs.xml
@@ -61,7 +61,7 @@ cd build</userinput></screen>
 <screen><userinput remap="install">make install-libs</userinput></screen>
 
     <para>Make the installed static libraries writable so debugging symbols can 
-    be removed later.</para>
+    be removed later:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput remap="install">chmod -v u+w \
     /tools/lib/{libblkid,libcom_err,libe2p,libext2fs,libss,libuuid}.a</userinput></screen>
diff --git a/chapter05/gcc-pass1.xml b/chapter05/gcc-pass1.xml
index 02854618d..25f809931 100644
--- a/chapter05/gcc-pass1.xml
+++ b/chapter05/gcc-pass1.xml
@@ -45,7 +45,7 @@
 
     <para>GCC now requires the GMP and MPFR packages. As these packages may
     not be included in your host distribution, they will be built with
-    GCC.</para>
+    GCC:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput remap="pre">tar -jxf ../mpfr-&mpfr-version;.tar.bz2
 mv mpfr-&mpfr-version; mpfr
diff --git a/chapter05/gcc-pass2.xml b/chapter05/gcc-pass2.xml
index b60c5c00a..bda37ab6c 100644
--- a/chapter05/gcc-pass2.xml
+++ b/chapter05/gcc-pass2.xml
@@ -115,7 +115,7 @@ done</userinput></screen>
     changes to the original files in case the command is inadvertently run twice.
     </para>
 
-    <para>On x86_64, unsetting the multlib spec for GCC ensures that it
+    <para>On x86_64, unsetting the multilib spec for GCC ensures that it
     won't attempt to link against libraries on the host:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput remap="pre">case $(uname -m) in
diff --git a/chapter06/e2fsprogs.xml b/chapter06/e2fsprogs.xml
index c22f26243..4e2e39eea 100644
--- a/chapter06/e2fsprogs.xml
+++ b/chapter06/e2fsprogs.xml
@@ -25,8 +25,9 @@
 
     <para>The E2fsprogs package contains the utilities for handling the
     <systemitem class="filesystem">ext2</systemitem> file system. It also
-    supports the <systemitem class="filesystem">ext3</systemitem> journaling
-    file system.</para>
+    supports the <systemitem class="filesystem">ext3</systemitem> and 
+    <systemitem class="filesystem">ext4</systemitem> journaling
+    file systems.</para>
 
     <segmentedlist>
       <segtitle>&buildtime;</segtitle>