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| author | Gerard Beekmans <gerard@linuxfromscratch.org> | 2009-05-24 06:26:02 +0000 |
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| committer | Gerard Beekmans <gerard@linuxfromscratch.org> | 2009-05-24 06:26:02 +0000 |
| commit | aa0a1be91201fb5663854b319826844f686e0d96 (patch) | |
| tree | 89fa93962dd60cad20c9cb674787c2fbb9e5302b | |
| parent | 77355e7b38196a82209c744d05359a003004fa3f (diff) | |
Edits suggested by Bruce.
git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@8909 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689
| -rw-r--r-- | prologue/foreword.xml | 4 |
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diff --git a/prologue/foreword.xml b/prologue/foreword.xml index ef90397ae..d590756f7 100644 --- a/prologue/foreword.xml +++ b/prologue/foreword.xml @@ -48,7 +48,7 @@ errors, a custom-built Linux system was finally built. It was fully operational and perfectly usable like any of the other Linux systems out there at the time. But it was my own creation. It was very satisfying to have put together such a system yourself. The only thing better would have -been to create each piece of software yourself. This was the next best +been to create each piece of software myself. This was the next best thing.</para> <para>As I shared my goals and experiences with other members of the Linux @@ -63,7 +63,7 @@ enhance their (existing) Linux skills. Out of this broadened interest, the provides the background and instructions necessary for you to design and build your own system. While this book provides a template that will result in a correctly working system, you are free to alter the instructions to -suit yourself . that is the whole point of the project after all. You +suit yourself, which is in part the whole point of this project after all. You remain in control; we just lend a helping hand to get you started on your own journey.</para> |