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| author | Matthew Burgess <matthew@linuxfromscratch.org> | 2005-04-16 15:17:10 +0000 |
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| committer | Matthew Burgess <matthew@linuxfromscratch.org> | 2005-04-16 15:17:10 +0000 |
| commit | 3ae818de968329c76df30cd637420ee9e3879ce6 (patch) | |
| tree | 1256076000db2d225f637fc26caa65bf28574709 | |
| parent | 8710bebc62b30794038283392d68bd14e60b9ba3 (diff) | |
* Minor wording/typo fixes
git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@4973 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter01/changelog.xml | 3 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | prologue/foreword.xml | 4 |
2 files changed, 5 insertions, 2 deletions
diff --git a/chapter01/changelog.xml b/chapter01/changelog.xml index 3916f284c..f9ee7e82b 100644 --- a/chapter01/changelog.xml +++ b/chapter01/changelog.xml @@ -83,6 +83,9 @@ first a summary, then a detailed log.</para> </itemizedlist> </listitem> +<listitem><para>April 16, 2005 [matt]: Minor wording/typo fixes (Peter Ennis) +</para></listitem> + <listitem><para>April 16, 2005 [matt]: Removed references to statically linking the pass 1 toolchain which should have gone as part of bug 1061 (Andrew Benton) </para></listitem> diff --git a/prologue/foreword.xml b/prologue/foreword.xml index 7f2c31288..a7f584da9 100644 --- a/prologue/foreword.xml +++ b/prologue/foreword.xml @@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ <title>Foreword</title> <?dbhtml filename="foreword.html"?> -<para>My adventures in Linux began six years ago when I downloaded and +<para>My adventures in Linux began in 1998 when I downloaded and installed my first distribution. After working with it for awhile, I discovered issues I definitely would have liked to see improved upon. For example, I didn't like the arrangement of the bootscripts or the way @@ -37,7 +37,7 @@ short.</para> <para>As I shared my goals and experiences with other members of the Linux community, it became apparent that there was sustained interest in the ideas set forth in my Linux adventures. Such custom-built LFS -systems not only to meet user specifications and requirements, but +systems serve not only to meet user specifications and requirements, but also serve as an ideal learning opportunity for programmers and system administrators to enhance their Linux skills. Out of this broadened interest, the Linux From Scratch Project was born.</para> |