applied Alex' procandshuffle patch

git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@1922 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

6 files changed, 19 insertions, 22 deletions

diff --git a/INSTALL b/INSTALL
index e50507dda..2a5e4c570 100644
--- a/INSTALL
+++ b/INSTALL
@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@ Modified DocBook Entities -
 	http://ftp.linuxfromscratch.org/misc/docbook-4.1.2-newent.tar.bz2
 DSSSL DocBook Stylesheets - http://www.nwalsh.com/docbook/dsssl/
 
-As the DocBook DTD and Stylesheets are made available as a zip achives you 
+As the DocBook DTD and Stylesheets are made available as zip archives you 
 may need to download the unzip package as well if your Linux system doesn't 
 have one:
 
@@ -30,7 +30,8 @@ FLTK (X front-end)        - http://sourceforge.net/projects/fltk
 If you want to be able to convert the book into TXT as well I recommend
 using lynx to convert HTML to TXT using the -dump option to lynx.
 
-Lynx					  - http://lynx.browser.org
+Lynx			  - http://lynx.browser.org
+
 
 You have everything you need now. Let's install this stuff.
 
@@ -73,7 +74,6 @@ Followed by installing openjade by running:
 	cp -av dsssl /usr/share/dsssl/openjade
 
 If you choose option 2, install OpenJade as follows:
-
 	./configure --prefix=/usr \
 	> --enable-default-catalog=/usr/share/docbook/docbook.cat:/usr/share/dsssl/docbook/catalog:/usr/share/dsssl/openjade/catalog
 	make
@@ -93,18 +93,14 @@ FLTK (you can skip this one if you don't want the X front-end):
 	make
 	make install
 
-HTMLDOC:
-Install by running:
-
+Install HTMLDOC by running:
 	./configure --prefix=/usr
 	make
 	make install
 
 
-
 The last package is Lynx which will be used for the HTML to TXT
 conversion. Install it by running:
-
 	./configure --prefix=/usr
 	make
 	make install
diff --git a/appendixa/appendixa.xml b/appendixa/appendixa.xml
index c16727578..fd5cf098f 100644
--- a/appendixa/appendixa.xml
+++ b/appendixa/appendixa.xml
@@ -25,11 +25,11 @@
 &aa-groff;
 &aa-gzip;
 &aa-kbd;
-&aa-kernel;
 &aa-less;
 &aa-bootscripts;
 &aa-libtool;
 &aa-lilo;
+&aa-kernel;
 &aa-m4;
 &aa-make;
 &aa-makedev;
diff --git a/appendixa/kernel.xml b/appendixa/kernel.xml
index 3adcefb45..815ea4774 100644
--- a/appendixa/kernel.xml
+++ b/appendixa/kernel.xml
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 <sect1 id="aa-kernel">
-<title>Linux kernel</title>
+<title>Linux (the kernel)</title>
 <?dbhtml filename="kernel.html" dir="appendixa"?>
 
 &aa-kernel-down;
diff --git a/chapter06/mountproc.xml b/chapter06/mountproc.xml
index cfc6f3a6f..27569062d 100644
--- a/chapter06/mountproc.xml
+++ b/chapter06/mountproc.xml
@@ -3,13 +3,14 @@
 <?dbhtml filename="proc.html" dir="chapter06"?>
 
 <para>In order for certain programs to function properly, the proc file
-system must be mounted and available from within the chroot'ed environment
-as well. It's not a problem to mount the proc file system (or any other
-file system for that matter) twice or even more than that.</para>
+system must be available from within the chroot'ed environment.
+A file system can be mounted as many times and in as many places
+as you'd like, so it's not a problem that the proc file system is already
+mounted on your host system, especially so because proc is a
+virtual file system.</para>
 
 <para>The proc file system is mounted under $LFS/proc by running the
-following command.  Note that we don't use the $LFS variable because we
-are now in chroot.</para>
+following command.</para>
 
 <para><screen><userinput>mount proc /proc -t proc</userinput></screen></para>
 
diff --git a/chapter06/reiserfs-inst.xml b/chapter06/reiserfs-inst.xml
index ea90f7e50..996770a13 100644
--- a/chapter06/reiserfs-inst.xml
+++ b/chapter06/reiserfs-inst.xml
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 <sect2>
 <title>Installation of Reiserfsprogs</title>
 
-<para>Reiserfsprogs only needs to be installed if you intend on using
+<para>Reiserfsprogs only needs to be installed if you intend to use
 the reiserfs filesystem.  Install Reiserfsprogs by running the 
 following commands:</para>
 
diff --git a/chapter06/vim-inst.xml b/chapter06/vim-inst.xml
index 69979fb86..394f02d43 100644
--- a/chapter06/vim-inst.xml
+++ b/chapter06/vim-inst.xml
@@ -1,11 +1,11 @@
 <sect2>
 <title>Installation of Vim</title>
 
-<para>If you don't like vim to be installed as an editor on the LFS system,
-you may want to download an alternative and install an editor you 
-prefer. There are a few hints how to install different editors
-available at <ulink url="&hints-root;"/>.  The hints 
-which are currently available are for Emacs, Joe and nano.</para>
+<para>If you don't like vim to be installed as an editor on your LFS system,
+you may want to download an alternative and install the editor you 
+prefer. There are a few hints on how to install different editors
+available at <ulink url="&hints-root;"/>.  Currently there are hints 
+for Emacs, joe, and nano.</para>
 
 <para>Install Vim by running the following commands:</para>
 
@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ make CPPFLAGS=-DSYS_VIMRC_FILE=\\\"/etc/vimrc\\\" &amp;&amp;
 make install &amp;&amp;
 ln -sf vim /usr/bin/vi</userinput></screen></para>
 
-<para>If you plan on installing the X Window system on your LFS
+<para>If you plan to install the X Window system on your LFS
 system, you might want to re-compile Vim after you have installed X. Vim
 comes with a nice GUI version of the editor which requires X and a few
 other libraries to be installed. For more information read the Vim