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authorManuel Canales Esparcia <manuel@linuxfromscratch.org>2005-04-12 20:32:00 +0000
committerManuel Canales Esparcia <manuel@linuxfromscratch.org>2005-04-12 20:32:00 +0000
commitd4a0804ecd393e5c52463597b3d228b555d18f99 (patch)
treeadc7626f10a8c6e880893e4657c11dde65e62142
parente986cdb4363d9acceaa927514a262a596051ac98 (diff)
Ported r4933 and r4935 from trunk: Small redaction changes.
git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/branches/multi-arch/BOOK@4940 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689
-rw-r--r--chapter01/administrativa.xml7
-rw-r--r--chapter01/changelog.xml8
-rw-r--r--chapter04/aboutsbus.xml2
-rw-r--r--general.ent4
4 files changed, 14 insertions, 7 deletions
diff --git a/chapter01/administrativa.xml b/chapter01/administrativa.xml
index 6708e8d06..e31913209 100644
--- a/chapter01/administrativa.xml
+++ b/chapter01/administrativa.xml
@@ -13,8 +13,8 @@
<para>If during the building of the LFS system you encounter any
errors, have any questions, or think there is a typo in the book,
-please start by consulting the Frequently Asked Questions (FAQ) at
-<ulink url="&faq-root;"/>.</para>
+please start by consulting the Frequently Asked Questions (FAQ)
+that are located at <ulink url="&faq-root;"/>.</para>
</sect2>
<sect2 id="ch-scatter-maillists" xreflabel="Chapter 1 - Mailing Lists">
@@ -66,8 +66,7 @@ LFS activities.</para>
<title>References</title>
<para>For additional information on the packages, useful tips are
-available at
-<ulink
+available in the LFS Package Reference page at <ulink
url="http://www.linuxfromscratch.org/~matthew/LFS-references.html"/>.</para>
</sect2>
diff --git a/chapter01/changelog.xml b/chapter01/changelog.xml
index 509e6cb16..2f169aeea 100644
--- a/chapter01/changelog.xml
+++ b/chapter01/changelog.xml
@@ -84,6 +84,14 @@ first a summary, then a detailed log.</para>
<listitem><para>Changelog Entries:</para>
<itemizedlist>
+<listitem><para>April 12, 2005 [manuel]</para>
+<itemizedlist>
+<listitem><para>Fixed: Arch: All - Small redaction changes ported from trunk.</para></listitem>
+</itemizedlist>
+</listitem>
+</itemizedlist>
+
+<itemizedlist>
<listitem><para>April 11, 2005 [manuel]</para>
<itemizedlist>
<listitem><para>Fixed: Arch: All - Tags and text corrections ported from trunk.</para></listitem>
diff --git a/chapter04/aboutsbus.xml b/chapter04/aboutsbus.xml
index 34e1a1ef4..42c31ca3c 100644
--- a/chapter04/aboutsbus.xml
+++ b/chapter04/aboutsbus.xml
@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ known to be approximately 30 percent slower). SBUs are also not
highly accurate for Symmetric Multi-Processor (SMP)-based machines.</para>
<para>To view actual timings for a number of specific machines, we recommend
-<ulink url="&lfs-root;~bdubbs/"/>.</para>
+The LinuxFromScratch SBU Home Page at <ulink url="&lfs-root;~bdubbs/"/>.</para>
<para>In general, SBUs are not very accurate because they depend on many
factors, not just the GCC version. They are provided
diff --git a/general.ent b/general.ent
index b96120422..e0afc6745 100644
--- a/general.ent
+++ b/general.ent
@@ -1,10 +1,10 @@
<?xml version="1.0" encoding="ISO-8859-1"?>
-<!ENTITY version "7.0-multiarch-20050411">
+<!ENTITY version "7.0-multiarch-20050412">
<!ENTITY version-x86 "&version;-x86">
<!ENTITY version-alpha "&version;-alpha">
<!ENTITY version-ppc "&version;-PowerPC">
<!ENTITY version-raq2 "&version;-RaQ2">
-<!ENTITY releasedate "April 11, 2005">
+<!ENTITY releasedate "April 12, 2005">
<!ENTITY milestone "7.0">
<!ENTITY lfs-root "http://www.linuxfromscratch.org/">