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| author | Bruce Dubbs <bdubbs@linuxfromscratch.org> | 2018-03-25 18:01:51 +0000 |
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| committer | Bruce Dubbs <bdubbs@linuxfromscratch.org> | 2018-03-25 18:01:51 +0000 |
| commit | ad1ccc74e9b922f93a74d9e3c7b38cdc09685bc5 (patch) | |
| tree | daa764430fe74295e75fba1d171ba9e11601d770 | |
| parent | b55310ed2590e83d930b65fd7b492cf1b56398b5 (diff) | |
Typos and minor text changes
git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@11388 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter06/systemd.xml | 2 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | prologue/foreword.xml | 2 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | prologue/standards.xml | 6 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | prologue/why.xml | 2 |
4 files changed, 6 insertions, 6 deletions
diff --git a/chapter06/systemd.xml b/chapter06/systemd.xml index 2a8ebd6d2..beddbc39e 100644 --- a/chapter06/systemd.xml +++ b/chapter06/systemd.xml @@ -58,7 +58,7 @@ <screen><userinput remap="pre">sed -i '527,565 d' src/basic/missing.h sed -i '24 d' src/core/load-fragment.c -sed -i '53 a#include <sys/mount.h>' src/shared/bus-unit-util.cd</userinput></screen> +sed -i '53 a#include <sys/mount.h>' src/shared/bus-unit-util.c</userinput></screen> <para>Remove an unneeded group, <systemitem class="groupname">render</systemitem>, from the default udev diff --git a/prologue/foreword.xml b/prologue/foreword.xml index 6a4c56828..f3f2c4418 100644 --- a/prologue/foreword.xml +++ b/prologue/foreword.xml @@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ <title>Foreword</title> -<para>My journey to learn and better understand Linux began over a decade ago, +<para>My journey to learn and better understand Linux began back in 1998. I had just installed my first Linux distribution and had quickly become intrigued with the whole concept and philosophy behind Linux.</para> diff --git a/prologue/standards.xml b/prologue/standards.xml index 8a79fbb92..46f52ccb9 100644 --- a/prologue/standards.xml +++ b/prologue/standards.xml @@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ </listitem> <listitem> <para><ulink url="http://refspecs.linuxfoundation.org/lsb.shtml">Linux - Standard Base (LSB) Version 5.0</ulink></para> + Standard Base (LSB) Version 5.0 (2015)</ulink></para> <para>The LSB has four separate standards: Core, Desktop, Runtime Languages, and Imaging. In addition to generic requirements @@ -117,7 +117,7 @@ <listitem> <para>Alsa, ATK, Cairo, Desktop-file-utils, Freetype, Fontconfig, Gdk-pixbuf, Glib2, GTK+2, Icon-naming-utils, Libjpeg-turbo, Libpng, Libtiff, - Libxml2, MesaLib, Pango, Qt4, Xdg-utils, Xorg</para> + Libxml2, MesaLib, Pango, Xdg-utils, Xorg</para> </listitem> </varlistentry> @@ -160,7 +160,7 @@ <varlistentry> <term><emphasis>LSB Desktop:</emphasis></term> <listitem> - <para>None</para> + <para>Qt4 (but Qt5 is provided)</para> </listitem> </varlistentry> diff --git a/prologue/why.xml b/prologue/why.xml index c202f3206..f6c8ed614 100644 --- a/prologue/why.xml +++ b/prologue/why.xml @@ -524,7 +524,7 @@ <listitem revision="systemd"> <para>Systemd</para> - <para>This package provides and <application>init</application> program + <para>This package provides an <application>init</application> program and several additional boot and system control capabilities as an alternative to Sysvinit. It is used by many commercial distributions. </para> |