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authorGerard Beekmans <gerard@linuxfromscratch.org>2003-02-05 18:42:10 +0000
committerGerard Beekmans <gerard@linuxfromscratch.org>2003-02-05 18:42:10 +0000
commit1d1c024b557f1540beec48bac5b3246b03df58d3 (patch)
tree03becd330953a5133956087056d276434f2c3d76
parentd67368f69a3960b90a9f5dcbeabc132aa1989ddf (diff)
sentence structure change
git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@2429 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689
-rw-r--r--chapter03/creatingpart.xml2
-rw-r--r--chapter06/vim-inst.xml11
2 files changed, 6 insertions, 7 deletions
diff --git a/chapter03/creatingpart.xml b/chapter03/creatingpart.xml
index 26bcd9508..e757082aa 100644
--- a/chapter03/creatingpart.xml
+++ b/chapter03/creatingpart.xml
@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@ a swap partition.</para>
<para>Start the <filename>cfdisk</filename> program with an argument naming
the hard disk upon which the new partition must be created -- for example
<filename>/dev/hda</filename> for the primary IDE disk. Create a Linux native
-partition, and if needed, a swap partition. Please refer to the man page of
+partition and a swap partition, if needed. Please refer to the man page of
<filename>cfdisk</filename> if you don't yet know how to use the program.</para>
<para>Remember the designation of your new partition -- something like
diff --git a/chapter06/vim-inst.xml b/chapter06/vim-inst.xml
index 984893dd0..7b2050f1c 100644
--- a/chapter06/vim-inst.xml
+++ b/chapter06/vim-inst.xml
@@ -20,12 +20,11 @@ install it. This patch fixes a compile problem with GCC-3.2:</para>
<itemizedlist>
<listitem><para><userinput>CPPFLAGS=-DSYS_VIMRC_FILE=\\\"/etc/vimrc\\\"</userinput>:
-This option above causes vim to look for the
-<filename>/etc/vimrc</filename> file which contains vim's global settings.
-Normally, this file is assumed to be located in <filename
-class="directory">/usr/share/vim</filename>, but we feel that
-<filename class="directory">/etc</filename> is a more logical place for this
-kind of file.</para></listitem>
+This option causes vim to look for the <filename>/etc/vimrc</filename> file
+which contains vim's global settings. Normally, this file is assumed to be
+located in <filename class="directory">/usr/share/vim</filename>, but we
+feel that <filename class="directory">/etc</filename> is a more logical
+place for this kind of file.</para></listitem>
</itemizedlist>
<para>The <emphasis>CPPFLAGS</emphasis> option above causes vim to look