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| author | Xi Ruoyao <xry111@xry111.site> | 2023-11-22 04:16:37 +0800 |
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| committer | Xi Ruoyao <xry111@xry111.site> | 2023-11-22 04:16:37 +0800 |
| commit | e49e2ea26119d5fe32b5d37ef0cac553944f9fa0 (patch) | |
| tree | 8bd69951c3f12fc838b3cb02c5d42754d667c182 | |
| parent | 7546d8b8505ecc175af166dfbec6798a6121dc9f (diff) | |
clfs-ng: Fix some grammar errorsxry111/clfs-ng
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter07/chroot.xml | 6 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter07/introduction.xml | 2 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter07/kernfs.xml | 5 |
3 files changed, 7 insertions, 6 deletions
diff --git a/chapter07/chroot.xml b/chapter07/chroot.xml index 2ebdfd75e..021ab0fb6 100644 --- a/chapter07/chroot.xml +++ b/chapter07/chroot.xml @@ -38,8 +38,8 @@ readonly IGNOREEOF=1000</userinput></screen> bash: no job control in this shell</computeroutput></screen> <para>This is normal because the shell is not assigned with a - controlling terminal yet. Now set up controlling terminal and - environment variables:</para> + controlling terminal yet. Now set up the controlling terminal and + some environment variables:</para> <screen><userinput>exec setsid -c /usr/bin/env -i \ HOME=/root \ @@ -50,7 +50,7 @@ bash: no job control in this shell</computeroutput></screen> TESTSUITEFLAGS="-j<replaceable>$(nproc)</replaceable>" \ /bin/bash --login</userinput></screen> - <para>The command replace the current shell process with a new shell + <para>The command replaces the current shell process with a new shell process, with controlling terminal set up.</para> <para> diff --git a/chapter07/introduction.xml b/chapter07/introduction.xml index c1d9a1317..73aff97d8 100644 --- a/chapter07/introduction.xml +++ b/chapter07/introduction.xml @@ -35,7 +35,7 @@ <para>All commands in this and following chapters are run as &root; on the target system, fortunately without access to the host system. Be careful anyway, as if the storage devices of your target system already - contain some important data, it's possible to destroy them with bad + contains some important data, it's possible to destroy them with bad commands.</para> </sect1> diff --git a/chapter07/kernfs.xml b/chapter07/kernfs.xml index afe5e83b1..5f46c62d1 100644 --- a/chapter07/kernfs.xml +++ b/chapter07/kernfs.xml @@ -72,8 +72,9 @@ mount -vt tmpfs tmpfs /dev/shm -o nosuid,nodev</userinput></screen> <sect2 id="ch-tools-devadjust"> <title>Adjusting devtmpfs</title> - <para>Now <systemitem class='filesystem'>proc</systemitem> filesystem - is mounted, we can replace the device nodes for standard I/O streams + <para>Now with the + <systemitem class='filesystem'>proc</systemitem> filesystem + mounted, we can replace the device nodes for standard I/O streams with symlinks to pseudo files in <filename class="directory">/proc/self/fd</filename> (which are symlinks to the files connected to the standard I/O streams for the current |