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authorXi Ruoyao <xry111@xry111.site>2022-10-23 10:26:03 +0800
committerXi Ruoyao <xry111@xry111.site>2022-10-23 10:26:03 +0800
commitfc60dac761dd96e5f896e284190a667982f1380f (patch)
tree8bdd3819b29f9d5f838569aec9ad80bf5b27c74e
parenta0ed201f90dc67a06dbcd58eccfcb7430b2139e8 (diff)
errata: some reword about security advisory
Do not use "whether there are any known security vulnerabilities" because it's highly unlikely there was none. Many people just build LFS for an experiment, then they don't need to maintain their system. The maintaining is only necessary for a real desktop or server system.
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build the LFS system.</para>
<para>In addition, the Linux From Scratch editors maintain a list of security
- vulnerabilities discovered <emphasis>after</emphasis> a book has been released. To see
- whether there are any known security vulnerabilities, please visit
- <ulink url="&secadv;"/> before proceeding with your build. You should also continue
- to consult the advisories, and fix any security vulnerabilities, even
- when the LFS system has been completely constructed.</para>
+ vulnerabilities discovered <emphasis>after</emphasis> a book has been released. To read the list, please visit
+ <ulink url="&secadv;"/> before proceeding with your build. You should apply
+ the changes suggested by the advisories to the relevant sections of the
+ book as you build the LFS system. And, if you will use the LFS system as
+ a real desktop or server system, you should continue to consult the
+ advisories and fix any security vulnerabilities, even when the LFS system
+ has been completely constructed.</para>
</sect1>