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authorMatthew Burgess <matthew@linuxfromscratch.org>2005-05-12 21:46:28 +0000
committerMatthew Burgess <matthew@linuxfromscratch.org>2005-05-12 21:46:28 +0000
commit296762cd02ce492bdbd6c889b94bbe6974c34f41 (patch)
tree47956cec364fc077cd278a6c76c24d516de722ce /chapter01
parenta86df627670f914d4e75076e4ee99385fa67f4fc (diff)
Wording and tagging improvements
git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@5318 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689
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-rw-r--r--chapter01/changelog.xml21
1 files changed, 12 insertions, 9 deletions
diff --git a/chapter01/changelog.xml b/chapter01/changelog.xml
index b86aa84df..40fd2dd75 100644
--- a/chapter01/changelog.xml
+++ b/chapter01/changelog.xml
@@ -12,8 +12,8 @@
version is probably already available. To find out, please check one of the
mirrors via <ulink url="&lfs-root;"/>.</para>
-<para>Below is a list of changes made since the previous release of the book,
-first a summary, then a detailed log.</para>
+<para>Below is a list of changes made since the previous release of the book.
+First a summary, then a detailed log.</para>
<itemizedlist>
@@ -84,6 +84,9 @@ first a summary, then a detailed log.</para>
</itemizedlist>
</listitem>
+<listitem><para>May 12th, 2005 [matt]: More wording and tagging improvements
+(thanks to Peter Ennis and Tony Morgan)</para></listitem>
+
<listitem><para>May 12th, 2005 [matt]: Minor wording improvements (thanks to
Peter Ennis)</para></listitem>
@@ -128,7 +131,7 @@ the pass 1 toolchain which should have gone as part of bug 1061 (Andrew Benton)
<listitem><para>April 11, 2005 [manuel]: Several tags and text corrections.</para></listitem>
-<listitem><para>April 6, 2005 [jim]: Removed Iproute2 patch for a sed (Ryan Oliver).</para></listitem>
+<listitem><para>April 6, 2005 [jim]: Removed IPRoute2 patch for a sed (Ryan Oliver).</para></listitem>
<listitem><para>April 6, 2005 [matt]: Move e2fsprogs sed command to
before entering the build directory (Steffen R. Knollmann).</para></listitem>
@@ -142,7 +145,7 @@ Kadzban)</para></listitem>
creates it (Ken Moffat). Also minor rewording to improve consistency.</para>
</listitem>
-<listitem><para>April 4, 2005 [matt]: Fix E2fsprogs compile problem (Ken Moffat
+<listitem><para>April 4, 2005 [matt]: Fix e2fsprogs compile problem (Ken Moffat
&amp; Greg Schafer)</para></listitem>
<listitem><para>April 4, 2005 [matt]: Mention bzip2's testsuite</para>
@@ -205,7 +208,7 @@ descriptions in a somewhat more alphabetic order.</para></listitem>
<listitem><para>March 14, 2005 [matt]: Upgraded to gettext-0.14.3</para>
</listitem>
-<listitem><para>March 14, 2005 [jim]: Added /var/log/hotplug for capturing
+<listitem><para>March 14, 2005 [jim]: Added <filename class="directory">/var/log/hotplug</filename> for capturing
of hotplug events. Added /lib/firmware for firmware loading with hotplug</para></listitem>
<listitem><para>March 13, 2005 [jim]: Updated iproute2 db patch to iproute2-2.6.11-050310. Removed
@@ -251,8 +254,8 @@ bug 1047. Thanks to Steve Crosby for the suggested explanatory text.</para>
<listitem><para>February 28, 2005 [matt]: Upgraded binutils to 2.14.94.0.2.2
</para></listitem>
-<listitem><para>February 28, 2005 [matt]: Move /usr/bin/logger to /bin
-as the bootscripts need it there. Fixes bug 1035.</para>
+<listitem><para>February 28, 2005 [matt]: Move <filename>/usr/bin/logger</filename>
+to <filename class="directory">/bin</filename> as the bootscripts need it there. Fixes bug 1035.</para>
</listitem>
<listitem><para>February 28, 2005 [matt]: Upgraded to iana-etc-1.04</para>
@@ -287,7 +290,7 @@ class="directory">/tools</filename>. This directory is not created
anymore.</para></listitem>
<listitem><para>February 19, 2005 [jeremy]: Added correction to chapter 5
-glibc build to correct the disabling of selinux functionality. Thanks to
+glibc build to fix the disabling of selinux functionality. Thanks to
Bobson on IRC (bobson@bobson.net) for pointing this out. Closes bugzilla
1034.</para></listitem>
@@ -372,7 +375,7 @@ should fix the TLS strip issue that's been seen, at least on X86</para></listite
<listitem><para>December 22, 2004 [manuel]: Readded to chapter09/reboot.xml a para lost
from version 5.1.</para></listitem>
-<listitem><para>December 20, 2004 [manuel]: Made Grub's configuration location
+<listitem><para>December 20, 2004 [manuel]: Made grub's configuration location
FHS compliant.</para></listitem>
<listitem><para>December 19, 2004 [manuel]: Added the irc.lfs-matrix.de IRC server.</para></listitem>