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| author | Simon Perreault <nomis80@videotron.ca> | 2001-03-15 16:20:28 +0000 |
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| committer | Simon Perreault <nomis80@videotron.ca> | 2001-03-15 16:20:28 +0000 |
| commit | 44512db507d01023172e0ded209dd10d22ade42f (patch) | |
| tree | 5c59d4c9a197dcd16fd1dbbf5df2270f0054b91f /chapter01 | |
| parent | 810a05bc79bf3c49b7819e5c8afbb97729381166 (diff) | |
Grammar fixes.
git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@324 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689
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| -rw-r--r-- | chapter01/how.xml | 8 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter01/versions.xml | 4 |
2 files changed, 6 insertions, 6 deletions
diff --git a/chapter01/how.xml b/chapter01/how.xml index cd3ff1b1b..70b06af01 100644 --- a/chapter01/how.xml +++ b/chapter01/how.xml @@ -3,17 +3,17 @@ <para> We are going to build the LFS system by using an already installed Linux -distribution such as Debian, SuSe, Slackware, Mandrake, RedHat, etc. You +distribution such as Debian, SuSE, Slackware, Mandrake, RedHat, etc. You don't need to have any kind of bootdisk. We will use an existing Linux -system as the base (since we need a compiler, linker, text editor and other -tools). +system as the base (since we need a compiler, linker, text editor, and +other tools). </para> <para> If you don't have Linux installed yet, you won't be able to put this book to use right away. I suggest you first install a Linux distribution. It really doesn't matter which one you install. It also -doesn't need to be the latest version, though it shouldn't be a too old one. +doesn't need to be the latest version, though it shouldn't be too old. If it is about a year old or newer it should do just fine. You will save yourself a lot of trouble if your normal system uses glibc-2.1 or newer. Libc5 isn't supported by this book, though it isn't impossible to use a diff --git a/chapter01/versions.xml b/chapter01/versions.xml index 428360a8b..63aeafe08 100644 --- a/chapter01/versions.xml +++ b/chapter01/versions.xml @@ -2,7 +2,7 @@ <title>Book version</title> <para> -This is LFS-BOOK-&type; version &version; version dated &releasedate;. If this +This is LFS-BOOK-&type; version &version; dated &releasedate;. If this version is older than a month you definitely want to take a look at our website and check if there is a newer version available for download. </para> @@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ Below you will find a list of our current HTTP and FTP mirror sites as of December 19th, 2000. This list might not be accurate anymore. For the latest info check our website at <ulink url="http://www.linuxfromscratch.org"> -http://www.linuxfromscratch.org</ulink> +http://www.linuxfromscratch.org</ulink>. </para> <sect2> |