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authorBruce Dubbs <bdubbs@linuxfromscratch.org>2020-06-09 17:25:59 +0000
committerBruce Dubbs <bdubbs@linuxfromscratch.org>2020-06-09 17:25:59 +0000
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Update text in cross2 branch Chapter 2.
git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/branches/cross2@11912 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689
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@@ -41,17 +41,17 @@
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para>Those two chapters must be done as user <emphasis>lfs</emphasis>.
- A <command>su - lfs</command> needs to be done before any task in this
- part. Failing to do that, you are at risk of installing packages to the
- host, and render it unusable.</para>
+ <para>Threse two chapters must be done as user <emphasis>lfs</emphasis>.
+ A <command>su - lfs</command> needs to be done before any task in these
+ chapters. Failing to do that, you are at risk of installing packages to the
+ host, and potentially rendering it unusable.</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>The procedures in <xref linkend='ch-tools-generalinstructions'/>
are critical. If there is any
doubt about installing a package, ensure any previously expanded
- tarballs are removed, re-extract the package files, and complete all
+ tarballs are removed, then re-extract the package files, and complete all
instructions in that section.</para>
</listitem>
</itemizedlist>
@@ -67,8 +67,8 @@
<listitem>
<para>A few operations, from <quote>Changing Ownership</quote> to
- <quote>Entering the Chroot Environment</quote> must be done as the
- root user, with LFS set for the root user.</para>
+ <quote>Entering the Chroot Environment</quote> must be done as the
+ root user, with the LFS envirnment variable set for the root user.</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>