Grammar fixes.

git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@326 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

2 files changed, 11 insertions, 11 deletions

diff --git a/chapter02/aboutlfs.xml b/chapter02/aboutlfs.xml
index 44675577c..a3efb19d8 100644
--- a/chapter02/aboutlfs.xml
+++ b/chapter02/aboutlfs.xml
@@ -6,11 +6,11 @@ Please read the following carefully: throughout this book you will
 frequently see the variable name $LFS. $LFS must at all times be
 replaced by the directory where the partition that contains the LFS system 
 is mounted. How to create and where to mount the partition will be
-explaind in full detail later on in chapter 4. In my case the LFS 
+explaind in full detail later on in chapter 4. In my case, the LFS 
 partition is mounted  on /mnt/lfs. If I read this book myself and I see 
 $LFS somewhere, I will pretend that I read /mnt/lfs. If I read that 
-I have to run this command: cp inittab $LFS/etc I actually will run this: 
-cp inittab /mnt/lfs/etc
+I have to run this command: cp inittab $LFS/etc, I actually will run this: 
+cp inittab /mnt/lfs/etc.
 </para>
 
 <para>
@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ commands you enter on the prompt, or in a file you edit or create.
 <para>
 If you want, you can set the environment variable LFS. This way you can
 literally enter $LFS instead of replacing it by something like
-/mnt/lfs. This is accomplished by running: export LFS=/mnt/lfs
+/mnt/lfs. This is accomplished by running: export LFS=/mnt/lfs.
 </para>
 
 <para>
@@ -34,17 +34,17 @@ automatically.
 Do not forget to set the $LFS variable at all times. If you haven't set
 the variable and you use it in a command, $LFS will be ignored and whatever
 is left will be executed. The command cp inittab $LFS/etc without the $LFS
-variable set, will result in copying the inittab file to the /etc
-directory which will overwrite your system's inittab. A file like inittab 
+variable set will result in copying the inittab file to the /etc
+directory, which will overwrite your system's inittab. A file like inittab 
 isn't that big a problem as it can easily be restored, but if you would 
-make this mistake during the installation of the C Library, you can
+make this mistake during the installation of the C Library, you could
 damage things.
 </para>
 
 <para>
-One way to make sure that $LFS is set at all times you could add it to
-your /root/.bash_profile and/or /root/.bashrc file(s) so everytime you
-'su' to user too as to install LFS, the $LFS variable is set for you.
+One way to make sure that $LFS is set at all times is adding it to
+your /root/.bash_profile and/or /root/.bashrc file(s) so that every time you
+'su' to install LFS, the $LFS variable is set for you.
 </para>
 
 </sect1>
diff --git a/chapter02/download.xml b/chapter02/download.xml
index c939473f2..8579666e1 100644
--- a/chapter02/download.xml
+++ b/chapter02/download.xml
@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ packages and work with them.
 <para>
 The next chapter contains the list of all the packages you need to download,
 but the partition that is going to contain our LFS system isn't created yet.
-Therefore store the files temporarily somewhere where you want and remember
+Therefore, store the files temporarily somewhere where you want and remember
 to copy them to $LFS/usr/src/ when you have finished the chapter in which 
 you prepare a new partition (chapter 4).
 </para>