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authorThomas Balu Walter <tw@itreff.de>2001-03-16 22:10:08 +0000
committerThomas Balu Walter <tw@itreff.de>2001-03-16 22:10:08 +0000
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<title>Introduction</title>
<para>
-Below is a list of all the packages you need to download for building
+Below is a list of all the packages that are needed to download for building
the basic system. The version numbers printed correspond to versions of
-the software that is known to work and which this book is based on. If you
-experience problems which you can't solve yourself, download the version that
-is assumed in this book (in case you downloaded a newer version).
+the software that is known to work and which this book is based on.
+If the user
+experiences problems which he can't solve himself, he should download the
+version that
+is assumed in this book (in case he downloaded a newer version).
</para>
<para>
@@ -20,15 +22,15 @@ Version</ulink>
We have provided a list of official download sites of the packages below
in <ulink url="appendixc.html">Appendix C - Official download locations
</ulink>. The LFS FTP archive only contains the versions of packages
-that are recommended for use in this book. If you're looking
-for newer versions than the ones listed here you can have a look in
-Appendix C.
+that are recommended for use in this book. Newer versions than the ones
+listed here might be found after having a look in Appendix C.
</para>
<para>
Please note that all files downloaded from the LFS FTP archive are files
-compressed with bzip2 instead of gz. If you don't know how to handle bz2
-files, please read <ulink url="ch02-install.html">Chapter 2 - How to install
+compressed with bzip2 instead of gz. If the user does not know how to
+handle bz2
+files, he should read <ulink url="ch02-install.html">Chapter 2 - How to install
the software</ulink>.
</para>