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| author | David Bryant <davidbryant@gvtc.com> | 2022-09-23 15:16:02 -0500 |
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| committer | David Bryant <davidbryant@gvtc.com> | 2022-09-23 15:16:02 -0500 |
| commit | 1cb4a25b36d2c3fbe58aa4df4dd67159b1fc6da2 (patch) | |
| tree | 9d849df8400b7ef159f92062b7d77326f57ccec0 /chapter04/introduction.xml | |
| parent | 81793c6efc67ebcd2e43cf3b9ebc659bbffa17f1 (diff) | |
Tweak English idiom in chapter 4.1 (Introduction)
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diff --git a/chapter04/introduction.xml b/chapter04/introduction.xml index c54c67f8c..e2ef6f0ba 100644 --- a/chapter04/introduction.xml +++ b/chapter04/introduction.xml @@ -12,11 +12,11 @@ <para>In this chapter, we will perform a few additional tasks to prepare for building the temporary system. We will create a set of directories in - <filename class="directory">$LFS</filename> for the installation of the - temporary tools, add an unprivileged user to reduce risk, + <filename class="directory">$LFS</filename> (in which we will install the + temporary tools), add an unprivileged user, and create an appropriate build environment for that user. We will also - explain the unit of time we use to measure how long LFS packages take to - build, or <quote>SBUs</quote>, and give some information about package + explain the units of time (<quote>SBUs</quote>) we use to measure how + long it takes to build LFS packages, and provide some information about package test suites.</para> </sect1> |