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authorDavid Bryant <davidbryant@gvtc.com>2022-09-23 15:52:30 -0500
committerDavid Bryant <davidbryant@gvtc.com>2022-09-23 15:52:30 -0500
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parent1cb4a25b36d2c3fbe58aa4df4dd67159b1fc6da2 (diff)
Refine verbiage in chapter 4.2 (Creating a limited directory layout).
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diff --git a/chapter04/creatingminlayout.xml b/chapter04/creatingminlayout.xml
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--- a/chapter04/creatingminlayout.xml
+++ b/chapter04/creatingminlayout.xml
@@ -10,14 +10,14 @@
<title>Creating a limited directory layout in LFS filesystem</title>
- <para>The first task performed in the LFS partition is to create a limited
- directory hierarchy so that programs compiled in <xref
+ <para>The next task to be performed in the LFS partition is to create a limited
+ directory hierarchy, so that the programs compiled in <xref
linkend="chapter-temporary-tools"/> (as well as glibc and libstdc++ in <xref
- linkend="chapter-cross-tools"/>) may be installed in their final
- location. This is needed so that those temporary programs be overwritten
- when rebuilding them in <xref linkend="chapter-building-system"/>.</para>
+ linkend="chapter-cross-tools"/>) can be installed in their final
+ location. We do this so those temporary programs will be overwritten when
+ the final versions are built in <xref linkend="chapter-building-system"/>.</para>
- <para>Create the required directory layout by running the following as
+ <para>Create the required directory layout by issuing the following commands as
<systemitem class="username">root</systemitem>:</para>
<screen><userinput>mkdir -pv $LFS/{etc,var} $LFS/usr/{bin,lib,sbin}
@@ -31,10 +31,10 @@ case $(uname -m) in
esac</userinput></screen>
<para>Programs in <xref linkend="chapter-temporary-tools"/> will be compiled
- with a cross-compiler (more details in section <xref
- linkend="ch-tools-toolchaintechnotes"/>). In order to separate this
- cross-compiler from the other programs, it will be installed in a special
- directory. Create this directory with:</para>
+ with a cross-compiler (more details can be found in section <xref
+ linkend="ch-tools-toolchaintechnotes"/>). This cross-compiler will be installed
+ in a special directory, to separate it from the other programs. Still acting as
+ &root;, create that directory with this command:</para>
<screen><userinput>mkdir -pv $LFS/tools</userinput></screen>