Touched up the grammar.

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diff --git a/chapter05/adjusting.xml b/chapter05/adjusting.xml
index 468241652..ea14302fa 100644
--- a/chapter05/adjusting.xml
+++ b/chapter05/adjusting.xml
@@ -7,14 +7,16 @@
 <title>Adjusting the toolchain</title>
 <?dbhtml filename="adjusting.html"?>
 
-<para>Now that the temporary C libraries have been installed, we want all
-the tools compiled in the rest of this chapter to be linked against these
-libraries. To accomplish this, we need to adjust the linker and the compiler's
-specs file. Some people would say that it is <emphasis><quote>black magic juju
+<para>Now that the temporary C libraries have been installed, all
+the tools compiled in the rest of this chapter should be linked against these
+libraries. In order to accomplish this the linker, and the compiler's
+specs file, need to be adjsted.</para>
+
+<para> Some people would say that there is <emphasis><quote>black magic juju
 below this line</quote></emphasis>, but it is really very simple.</para>
 
-<para>First install the adjusted linker (adjusted at the end of the first pass
-of Binutils) by running the following command from within
+<para>First the adjusted linker is installed (adjusted at the end of the first pass
+of Binutils), by running the following command from within
 the <filename class="directory">binutils-build</filename> directory:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>make -C ld install</userinput></screen>
@@ -22,19 +24,18 @@ the <filename class="directory">binutils-build</filename> directory:</para>
 <para>From this point onwards everything will link <emphasis>only</emphasis>
 against the libraries in <filename class="directory">/tools/lib</filename>.</para>
 
-<note><para>If you somehow missed the earlier warning to retain the Binutils
-source and build directories from the first pass or otherwise accidentally
-deleted them or just don't have access to them, don't worry, all is not lost.
-Just ignore the above command. The result is a small chance of the subsequent
+<note><para>If you missed the earlier warning to retain the Binutils
+source and build directories from the first pass, dont worry - all is not lost.
+Just ignore the above command. This results in a small chance of the subsequent
 testing programs linking against libraries on the host. This is not ideal, but
-it's not a major problem. The situation is corrected when we install the
-second pass of Binutils a bit further on.</para></note>
+it's not a major problem. The situation is corrected when the second pass of
+Binutils is installed later on.</para></note>
 
-<para>Now that the adjusted linker is installed, you have to
-<emphasis>remove</emphasis> the Binutils build and source directories.</para>
+<para>Now that the adjusted linker is installed, the Binutils build and source
+direcotries should be <emphasis>removed</emphasis>.</para>
 
-<para>The next thing to do is to amend our GCC specs file so that it points
-to the new dynamic linker. A simple sed will accomplish this:</para>
+<para>The next task is to amend our GCC specs file so that it points
+to the new dynamic linker. A simple sed script will accomplish this:</para>
 
 <!-- Ampersands are needed to allow cut and paste -->
 
@@ -44,11 +45,9 @@ sed -e 's@ /lib/ld-linux.so.2@ /tools/lib/ld-linux.so.2@g' \
 mv -f tempspecfile $SPECFILE &amp;&amp;
 unset SPECFILE</userinput></screen>
 
-<para>We recommend that you cut-and-paste the above rather than try and type it
-all in. Or you can edit the specs file by hand if you want to: just replace the
-occurrence of <quote>/lib/ld-linux.so.2</quote> with
-<quote>/tools/lib/ld-linux.so.2</quote>. Be sure to visually inspect the specs
-file to verify the intended change was actually made.</para>
+<para>It is recommended that the above command be cut-and-pasted in order to ensure correctness - Alternatively the specs file can be edited by hand. This is done simply by replacing every occurrence of <quote>/lib/ld-linux.so.2</quote> with <quote>/tools/lib/ld-linux.so.2</quote>.</para>
+
+<para> Be sure to visually inspect the specs file in order to verify the intended changes have been mande.</para>
 
 <important><para>If you are working on a platform where the name of the dynamic
 linker is something other than <filename>ld-linux.so.2</filename>, you
@@ -58,45 +57,44 @@ name of your platform's dynamic linker in the above commands. Refer back to
 
 <para>Lastly, there is a possibility that some include files from the host
 system have found their way into GCC's private include dir. This can happen
-because of GCC's <quote>fixincludes</quote> process which runs as part of the
-GCC build.  We'll explain more about this further on in this chapter. For now,
-run the following commands to eliminate this possibility:</para>
+as a result of of GCC's <quote>fixincludes</quote> process which runs as part
+of the GCC build.  We'll explain more about this further on in this chapter.
+Run the following commands to eliminate this possibility:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>rm -f /tools/lib/gcc/*/*/include/{pthread.h,bits/sigthread.h}</userinput></screen>
 
 
 <caution><para>It is imperative at this point to stop and ensure that the basic
 functions (compiling and linking) of the new toolchain are working as expected.
-For this we are going to perform a simple sanity check:</para>
+To perform a simple sanity check run the following commands:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>echo 'main(){}' &gt; dummy.c
 cc dummy.c
 readelf -l a.out | grep ': /tools'</userinput></screen>
 
 <para>If everything is working correctly, there should be no errors, and the
-output of the last command will be (allowing for platform specific differences
-in dynamic linker name):</para>
+output of the last command will be of the form:</para>
 
 <blockquote><screen><computeroutput>[Requesting program interpreter: /tools/lib/ld-linux.so.2]</computeroutput></screen></blockquote>
 
 <para>Note especially that <filename class="directory">/tools/lib</filename>
 appears as the prefix of our dynamic linker.</para>
 
-<para>If you did not receive the output
-as shown above, or received no output at all, then something is seriously wrong.
-You will need to investigate and retrace your steps to find out where the
+<para>If the output is not
+as shown above, or there was no output at all, then something is seriously
+wrong. You will need to investigate and retrace your steps to find out where the
 problem is and correct it. There is no point in continuing until this is done.
-First, redo the sanity check using <command>gcc</command> instead of
-<command>cc</command>. If this works it means the
+First, perform the sanity check again, using <command>gcc</command> instead of
+<command>cc</command>. If this works then the
 <filename class="symlink">/tools/bin/cc</filename> symlink is missing. Revisit
-<xref linkend="ch-tools-gcc-pass1"/> and fix the symlink. Second, ensure your PATH
+<xref linkend="ch-tools-gcc-pass1"/> and install the symlink. Second, ensure your PATH
 is correct. You can check this by running <userinput>echo $PATH</userinput> and
 verifying that <filename class="directory">/tools/bin</filename> is at the head
 of the list. If the PATH is wrong it could mean you're not logged in as user
 <emphasis>lfs</emphasis> or something went wrong back in
 <xref linkend="ch-tools-settingenviron"/>. Third, something may have gone wrong with
 the specs file amendment above. In this case redo the specs file amendment
-ensuring to cut-and-paste the commands as was recommended.</para>
+being careful to cut-and-paste the commands.</para>
 
 <para>Once you are satisfied that all is well, clean up the test files:</para>