Minor textual shuffles.

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diff --git a/chapter05/coreutils.xml b/chapter05/coreutils.xml
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--- a/chapter05/coreutils.xml
+++ b/chapter05/coreutils.xml
@@ -17,16 +17,16 @@ And for the patch:
 <sect2>
 <title>Installation of Coreutils</title>
 
-<para>Coreutils has an issue when compiled against Glibc-&glibc-version;.
-Without the patch below, some of the Coreutils utilities
-(<command>head</command>, <command>tail</command>, <command>sort</command>,
-and others) will reject their traditional syntax which has been in use for
+<para>This package has an issue when compiled against Glibc-&glibc-version;.
+Without the patch below, some of the Coreutils utilities (such as
+(<command>head</command>, <command>tail</command> and <command>sort</command>)
+will reject their traditional syntax, a syntax that has been in use for
 approximately 30 years. This old syntax is so pervasive that compatibility
-should be preserved until the many places where it is used can be updated.
-More details on this are provided in the comments inside the patch itself. Use
-of this patch is by no means compulsory, but not using it means you'll have to
-deal with the consequences yourself: patch the many packages that use the old
-syntax. Therefore, better apply the patch:</para>
+should be preserved until the many places where it is used can be updated. More
+details on this are provided in the comments inside the patch itself. Use of
+this patch is by no means compulsory, but not using it means you'll have to
+deal with the consequences yourself: patch the many packages that still use the
+old syntax. Therefore, better apply the patch:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>patch -Np1 -i ../&coreutils-posixver-patch;</userinput></screen>