Several minor wording changes (chapters 1 - 5).

git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@6232 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

1 files changed, 8 insertions, 10 deletions

diff --git a/chapter05/toolchaintechnotes.xml b/chapter05/toolchaintechnotes.xml
index 5b2522458..6e4d54afb 100644
--- a/chapter05/toolchaintechnotes.xml
+++ b/chapter05/toolchaintechnotes.xml
@@ -13,16 +13,14 @@ immediately understand everything in this section. Most of this
 information will be clearer after performing an actual build. This
 section can be referred back to at any time during the process.</para>
 
-<para>The overall goal of <xref linkend="chapter-temporary-tools"/> is
-to provide a temporary environment that can be chrooted into and from
-which can be produced a clean, trouble-free build of the target LFS
-system in <xref linkend="chapter-building-system"/>. Along the way, we
-separate from the host system as much as possible, and in doing so,
-build a self-contained and self-hosted toolchain. It should be noted
-that the build process has been designed to minimize the risks for new
-readers and provide maximum educational value at the same time. In
-other words, more advanced techniques could be used to build the
-system.</para>
+<para>The overall goal of <xref linkend="chapter-temporary-tools"/> is to
+provide a temporary environment that can be chrooted into and from which can be
+produced a clean, trouble-free build of the target LFS system in <xref
+linkend="chapter-building-system"/>. Along the way, we separate the new system
+from the host system as much as possible, and in doing so, build a
+self-contained and self-hosted toolchain. It should be noted that the build
+process has been designed to minimize the risks for new readers and provide
+maximum educational value at the same time.</para>
 
 <important>
 <para>Before continuing, be aware of the name of the working platform,