Several minor wording changes in chapter 6 (matt).

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diff --git a/chapter06/creatingdirs.xml b/chapter06/creatingdirs.xml
index 3a574fee6..f8344fef5 100644
--- a/chapter06/creatingdirs.xml
+++ b/chapter06/creatingdirs.xml
@@ -49,16 +49,15 @@ bit mask.</para>
 <sect2>
 <title>FHS Compliance Note</title>
 
-<para>The directory tree is based on the Filesystem Hierarchy Standard
-(FHS) standard (available at <ulink
-url="http://www.pathname.com/fhs/"/>). Besides the tree created above,
-this standard stipulates the existence of <filename
+<para>The directory tree is based on the Filesystem Hierarchy Standard (FHS)
+ (available at <ulink url="http://www.pathname.com/fhs/"/>). In addition
+to the tree created above, this standard stipulates the existence of <filename
 class="directory">/usr/local/games</filename> and <filename
-class="directory">/usr/share/games</filename>.  We do not recommend
-these for a base system, however, feel free to make the system
-FHS-compliant.  The FHS is not precise as to the structure of the
-<filename class="directory">/usr/local/share</filename> subdirectory,
-so we created only the directories that are needed.</para>
+class="directory">/usr/share/games</filename>. The FHS is not precise as to the
+structure of the <filename class="directory">/usr/local/share</filename>
+subdirectory, so we create only the directories that are needed. However, feel
+free to create these directories if you prefer to conform more strictly to the
+FHS standard.</para>
 
 </sect2>