Typos and wording changes

git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@11343 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

1 files changed, 15 insertions, 16 deletions

diff --git a/chapter06/systemd.xml b/chapter06/systemd.xml
index 9bd8fd6d0..6c8a79e19 100644
--- a/chapter06/systemd.xml
+++ b/chapter06/systemd.xml
@@ -123,13 +123,12 @@ meson --prefix=/usr                \
       </varlistentry>
 
       <varlistentry>
-        <term><parameter>-Dldconfig=no</parameter></term>
+        <term><parameter>-Dldconfig=false</parameter></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>This switch prevents installation of a systemd
-          unit that runs <command>ldconfig</command> at
-          boot, making the boot time longer. Remove it if the
-          described feature is desired, even though it's not
-          useful for source distributions such as LFS.</para>
+          <para>This switch prevents installation of a systemd unit that runs
+          <command>ldconfig</command> at boot, which is not useful for source
+          distributions such as LFS and makes the boot time longer. Remove it
+          if the described feature is desired.</para>
         </listitem>
       </varlistentry>
 
@@ -158,7 +157,7 @@ meson --prefix=/usr                \
           services responsible for setting up the
           <filename>/etc/group</filename> and
           <filename>/etc/passwd</filename> files. Both files
-          were created early in this chapter.</para>
+          were created earlier in this chapter.</para>
         </listitem>
       </varlistentry>
 
@@ -250,7 +249,7 @@ chmod 755 /lib/systemd/systemd-user-sessions</userinput></screen>
       <varlistentry id="bootctl">
         <term><command>bootctl</command></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>used to query the firmware and boot manager settings</para>
+          <para>Used to query the firmware and boot manager settings</para>
           <indexterm zone="ch-system-systemd bootctl">
             <primary sortas="b-bootctl">bootctl</primary>
           </indexterm>
@@ -306,8 +305,8 @@ chmod 755 /lib/systemd/systemd-user-sessions</userinput></screen>
         <term><command>init</command></term>
         <listitem>
           <para>The first process to be started when the kernel has initialized
-          the hardware which takes over the boot process and starts all the
-          proceses it is instructed to</para>
+          the hardware which takes over the boot process and starts all 
+          processes according to its configuration files</para>
           <indexterm zone="ch-system-systemd init">
             <primary sortas="b-init">init</primary>
           </indexterm>
@@ -317,7 +316,7 @@ chmod 755 /lib/systemd/systemd-user-sessions</userinput></screen>
       <varlistentry id="journalctl">
         <term><command>journalctl</command></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>Used to query the contents of the systemd Journal</para>
+          <para>Used to query the contents of the systemd journal</para>
           <indexterm zone="ch-system-systemd journalctl">
             <primary sortas="b-journalctl">journalctl</primary>
           </indexterm>
@@ -558,7 +557,7 @@ chmod 755 /lib/systemd/systemd-user-sessions</userinput></screen>
       <varlistentry id="systemd-mount">
         <term><command>systemd-mount</command></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>is a tool to temporarily mount or auto-mount a drive.</para>
+          <para>A tool to temporarily mount or auto-mount a drive.</para>
           <indexterm zone="ch-system-systemd systemd-mount">
             <primary sortas="b-systemd-mount">systemd-mount</primary>
           </indexterm>
@@ -632,7 +631,7 @@ chmod 755 /lib/systemd/systemd-user-sessions</userinput></screen>
       <varlistentry id="systemd-socket-activate">
         <term><command>systemd-socket-activate</command></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>is a tool to listen on socket devices and launch a process upon
+          <para>A tool to listen on socket devices and launch a process upon
           connection.</para>
           <indexterm zone="ch-system-systemd systemd-socket-activate">
             <primary sortas="b-systemd-socket-activate">systemd-socket-activate</primary>
@@ -688,9 +687,9 @@ chmod 755 /lib/systemd/systemd-user-sessions</userinput></screen>
       <varlistentry id="udevadm">
         <term><command>udevadm</command></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>Generic Udev administration tool: controls the udevd daemon,
+          <para>Generic udev administration tool: controls the udevd daemon,
           provides info from the Udev database, monitors uevents, waits for
-          uevents to finish, tests Udev configuration, and triggers uevents
+          uevents to finish, tests udev configuration, and triggers uevents
           for a given device</para>
           <indexterm zone="ch-system-systemd udevadm">
             <primary sortas="b-udevadm">udevadm</primary>
@@ -701,7 +700,7 @@ chmod 755 /lib/systemd/systemd-user-sessions</userinput></screen>
       <varlistentry id="libsystemd">
         <term><filename class="libraryfile">libsystemd</filename></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>systemd utility library</para>
+          <para>The main systemd utility library</para>
           <indexterm zone="ch-system-systemd libsystemd">
             <primary sortas="c-libsystemd">libsystemd</primary>
           </indexterm>