Textual corrections from Chris Staub - dependency information is now in the appendix, not in chapter 6. Specific compiler optimisations are not provided so remove mentioning them.

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diff --git a/chapter06/introduction.xml b/chapter06/introduction.xml
index 588d84780..1a5e0aae4 100644
--- a/chapter06/introduction.xml
+++ b/chapter06/introduction.xml
@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@
   followed by concise descriptions of each program and library the package
   installed.</para>
 
-  <para>If using the compiler optimizations provided in this chapter, please
+  <para>If using compiler optimizations, please
   review the optimization hint at <ulink url="&hints-root;optimization.txt"/>.
   Compiler optimizations can make a program run slightly faster, but they may
   also cause compilation difficulties and problems when running the program.
@@ -49,10 +49,9 @@
 
   <para>Before the installation instructions, each installation page provides
   information about the package, including a concise description of what it
-  contains, approximately how long it will take to build, how much disk space
-  is required during this building process, and any other packages needed to
-  successfully build the package. Following the installation instructions,
-  there is a list of programs and libraries (along with brief descriptions of
-  these) that the package installs.</para>
+  contains, approximately how long it will take to build, and how much disk
+  space is required during this building process. Following the installation
+  instructions, there is a list of programs and libraries (along with brief
+  descriptions of these) that the package installs.</para>
 
 </sect1>