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authorBruce Dubbs <bdubbs@linuxfromscratch.org>2023-11-13 09:44:05 -0600
committerXi Ruoyao <xry111@xry111.site>2023-11-14 00:31:08 +0800
commit798e18b09fd0d0554c8b333e76f43051cc2f5086 (patch)
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parent7a72a22f9ba2c4e665dc4eefec60bc588ab57673 (diff)
Minor grammar corrections.
Mistakenly removed the remote WIP branch while it's not fully merged yet. Cherry-pick the discarded commit. (cherry picked from commit 2f3f0e9e813f60a88e9f557842a7b9a50cdec50b)
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@@ -28,14 +28,13 @@
/bin/bash --login</userinput></screen>
<para>
- Again, replace <replaceable>$(nproc)</replaceable> with the number
- of logical cores you want to use for building packages in this chapter
- and the following chapters if you don't want to use all available
- logical cores. The test suites of some packages (notably Autoconf,
- Libtool, and Tar) in &ch-final; are not affected by
- <envar>MAKEFLAGS</envar>, they use a <envar>TESTSUITEFLAGS</envar>
- environment variable instead. So we set it here as well for running
- these test suites with multiple cores.
+ If you don't want to use all available logical cores, replace
+ <replaceable>$(nproc)</replaceable> with the number of logical cores you
+ want to use for building packages in this chapter and the following
+ chapters. The test suites of some packages (notably Autoconf, Libtool,
+ and Tar) in &ch-final; are not affected by <envar>MAKEFLAGS</envar>, they
+ use a <envar>TESTSUITEFLAGS</envar> environment variable instead. We
+ set set that here as well for running these test suites with multiple cores.
</para>
<para>The <parameter>-i</parameter> option given to the <command>env</command>
@@ -60,7 +59,7 @@
in the <envar>PATH</envar>. This means that the cross toolchain will no longer be
used.</para>
- <para>Note that the <command>bash</command> prompt will say
+ <para>Also note that the <command>bash</command> prompt will say
<computeroutput>I have no name!</computeroutput> This is normal because the
<filename>/etc/passwd</filename> file has not been created yet.</para>