Correct capitalization, spelling, grammar, and idiom. Tighten the

prose by removing some circumlocutions.

1 files changed, 10 insertions, 10 deletions

diff --git a/chapter08/glibc.xml b/chapter08/glibc.xml
index 0bc9a5dcf..a85559d24 100644
--- a/chapter08/glibc.xml
+++ b/chapter08/glibc.xml
@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@
   <sect2 role="installation">
     <title>Installation of Glibc</title>
 
-    <para>First, fix an issue building Glibc with parallel jobs and make-4.4
+    <para>First, fix an issue building Glibc with parallel jobs and Make-4.4
     or later:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput remap="pre">sed '/MAKEFLAGS :=/s/)r/) -r/' -i Makerules</userinput></screen>
@@ -82,7 +82,7 @@ cd       build</userinput></screen>
       <varlistentry>
         <term><parameter>--disable-werror</parameter></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>This option disables the -Werror option passed to
+          <para>This option disables the -werror option passed to
           GCC.  This is necessary for running the test suite.</para>
         </listitem>
       </varlistentry>
@@ -90,7 +90,7 @@ cd       build</userinput></screen>
       <varlistentry>
         <term><parameter>--enable-kernel=&min-kernel;</parameter></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>This option tells the build system that this glibc may
+          <para>This option tells the build system that this Glibc may
           be used with kernels as old as &min-kernel;. This means generating
           workarounds in case a system call introduced in a later version
           cannot be used.</para>
@@ -217,7 +217,7 @@ esac</userinput></screen>
 
 <screen><userinput remap="install">make install</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para>Fix hardcoded path to the executable loader in
+    <para>Fix a hardcoded path to the executable loader in the
     <command>ldd</command> script:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput remap="install">sed '/RTLDLIST=/s@/usr@@g' -i /usr/bin/ldd</userinput></screen>
@@ -235,9 +235,9 @@ mkdir -pv /var/cache/nscd</userinput></screen>
 install -v -Dm644 ../nscd/nscd.service /usr/lib/systemd/system/nscd.service</userinput></screen>
 
     <para>Next, install the locales that can make the system respond in a
-    different language.  None of the locales are required, but if some of them
-    are missing, the test suites of future packages would skip important
-    testcases.</para>
+    different language.  None of these locales are required, but if some of them
+    are missing, the test suites of some packages will skip important
+    test cases.</para>
 
     <para>Individual locales can be installed using the
     <command>localedef</command> program. E.g., the second
@@ -290,7 +290,7 @@ localedef -i zh_TW -f UTF-8 zh_TW.UTF-8</userinput></screen>
     <para>In addition, install the locale for your own country, language and
     character set.</para>
 
-    <para>Alternatively, install all locales listed in the
+    <para>Alternatively, install all the locales listed in the
     <filename>glibc-&glibc-version;/localedata/SUPPORTED</filename> file
     (it includes every locale listed above and many more) at once with the
     following time-consuming command:</para>
@@ -326,7 +326,7 @@ localedef -i ja_JP -f SHIFT_JIS ja_JP.SJIS 2> /dev/null || true</userinput></scr
     </indexterm>
 
   <sect3>
-  <title>Adding nsswitch.conf</title>
+  <title>Adding Nsswitch.conf</title>
 
     <para>The <filename>/etc/nsswitch.conf</filename> file needs to be created
     because the Glibc defaults do not work well in a networked environment.
@@ -356,7 +356,7 @@ EOF</userinput></screen>
     </sect3>
 
     <sect3>
-    <title>Adding time zone data</title>
+    <title>Adding Time Zone Data</title>
 
     <para>Install and set up the time zone data with the following:</para>
 <screen><userinput>tar -xf ../../tzdata&tzdata-version;.tar.gz