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| author | David Bryant <davidbryant@gvtc.com> | 2022-12-06 11:33:02 -0600 |
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| committer | David Bryant <davidbryant@gvtc.com> | 2022-12-06 11:33:02 -0600 |
| commit | 7c263b6db0e67d2d76aa008c1cf861f61a417673 (patch) | |
| tree | 896e49485e36ad5cbc092155bf3861de3c082e3a /chapter08/libtool.xml | |
| parent | 79ac947fda4fbd84a40b4666a3138e79b24811af (diff) | |
Clean up capitalization. Improve English idiom. Use the present
perfect tense when appropriate. Replace "dlopening" with "opening
dynamically linked libraries" ... "dlopen" may be a Linux command,
but that doesn't make it a verb in English.
Diffstat (limited to 'chapter08/libtool.xml')
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter08/libtool.xml | 8 |
1 files changed, 4 insertions, 4 deletions
diff --git a/chapter08/libtool.xml b/chapter08/libtool.xml index e7eeb3ad9..5f1d3c36d 100644 --- a/chapter08/libtool.xml +++ b/chapter08/libtool.xml @@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ <title/> <para>The Libtool package contains the GNU generic library support script. - It wraps the complexity of using shared libraries in a consistent, portable + It makes the use of shared libraries simpler with a consistent, portable interface.</para> <segmentedlist> @@ -54,7 +54,7 @@ <screen><userinput remap="test">make -k check</userinput></screen> - <note><para>The test time for libtool can be reduced significantly on a + <note><para>The test time for Libtool can be reduced significantly on a system with multiple cores. To do this, append <command>TESTSUITEFLAGS=-j<N></command> to the line above. For instance, using -j4 can reduce the test time by over 60 @@ -62,7 +62,7 @@ <para>Five tests are known to fail in the LFS build environment due to a circular dependency, but these tests pass if rechecked after - automake is installed. Additionally, with grep-3.8, two tests will + automake has been installed. Additionally, with grep-3.8, two tests will trigger a warning for non-POSIX regular expressions and fail.</para> <para>Install the package:</para> @@ -123,7 +123,7 @@ <varlistentry id="libltdl"> <term><filename class="libraryfile">libltdl</filename></term> <listitem> - <para>Hides the various difficulties of dlopening libraries</para> + <para>Hides the various difficulties of opening dynamically linked libraries</para> <indexterm zone="ch-system-libtool libltdl"> <primary sortas="c-libltdl">libltdl</primary> </indexterm> |