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| author | David Bryant <davidbryant@gvtc.com> | 2022-12-19 13:44:36 -0600 |
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| committer | David Bryant <davidbryant@gvtc.com> | 2022-12-19 13:44:36 -0600 |
| commit | d15c80e1b48c272ccd5b4510c2c139bda30896bc (patch) | |
| tree | f4f7913990fe1c184f3441f7f5331a8e4f6d3e53 /chapter08/sysklogd.xml | |
| parent | 8cde1045985f5a4ddf73dba34deac0f103f09a37 (diff) | |
Capitalize package names. Patch up a clumsy sentence. Change an
instance of the imperative mood to the indicative. Improve the
description of the "halt" and "init" programs.
Diffstat (limited to 'chapter08/sysklogd.xml')
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter08/sysklogd.xml | 8 |
1 files changed, 4 insertions, 4 deletions
diff --git a/chapter08/sysklogd.xml b/chapter08/sysklogd.xml index 9aec7ba9b..89fc314ed 100644 --- a/chapter08/sysklogd.xml +++ b/chapter08/sysklogd.xml @@ -23,8 +23,8 @@ <sect2 role="package"> <title/> - <para>The sysklogd package contains programs for logging system messages, - such as those given by the kernel when unusual things happen.</para> + <para>The Sysklogd package contains programs for logging system messages, + such as those emitted by the kernel when unusual things happen.</para> <segmentedlist> <segtitle>&buildtime;</segtitle> @@ -41,8 +41,8 @@ <sect2 role="installation"> <title>Installation of Sysklogd</title> - <para>First, fix problems that causes a segmentation fault under - some conditions in klogd and fix an obsolete program construct:</para> + <para>First, fix a problem that causes a segmentation fault in klogd + under some conditions, and fix an obsolete program construct:</para> <screen><userinput remap="pre">sed -i '/Error loading kernel symbols/{n;n;d}' ksym_mod.c sed -i 's/union wait/int/' syslogd.c</userinput></screen> |