Mostly text updates in Chapter 8.

There are a couple of minor command changes.



git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/branches/cross2@11924 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

1 files changed, 12 insertions, 22 deletions

diff --git a/chapter08/vim.xml b/chapter08/vim.xml
index 4ec0d1a3b..4d06d5a08 100644
--- a/chapter08/vim.xml
+++ b/chapter08/vim.xml
@@ -54,11 +54,7 @@
 
 <screen><userinput remap="pre">echo '#define SYS_VIMRC_FILE "/etc/vimrc"' &gt;&gt; src/feature.h</userinput></screen>
 
-<!--    <para>Disable a test that fails:</para>
-
-<screen><userinput remap="pre">sed -i '/call/{s/split/xsplit/;s/303/492/}' src/testdir/test_recover.vim</userinput></screen>
--->
-    <para>Prepare Vim for compilation:</para>
+    <para>Prepare vim for compilation:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput remap="configure">./configure --prefix=/usr</userinput></screen>
 
@@ -66,19 +62,17 @@
 
 <screen><userinput remap="make">make</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para>To prepare the tests, ensure that the 
-    <systemitem class="username">tester</systemitem> user can write 
-    to the sources tree:</para>
+    <para>To prepare the tests, ensure that user 
+    <systemitem class="username">tester</systemitem> can write 
+    to the source tree:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput remap="test">chown -Rv tester .</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para>Now run the tests as the <systemitem
-    class="username">tester</systemitem> user:</para>
+    <para>Now run the tests as user <systemitem
+    class="username">tester</systemitem>:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput remap="test">su tester -c "LANG=en_US.UTF-8 make -j1 test" &amp;> vim-test.log</userinput></screen>
 
-<!--<screen><userinput remap="test">LANG=en_US.UTF-8 make -j1 test &amp;&gt; vim-test.log</userinput></screen>-->
-
     <para>The test suite outputs a lot of binary data to the screen.  This can
     cause issues with the settings of the current terminal.  The problem can be
     avoided by redirecting the output to a log file as shown above.  A
@@ -100,7 +94,7 @@ for L in  /usr/share/man/{,*/}man1/vim.1; do
     ln -sv vim.1 $(dirname $L)/vi.1
 done</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para>By default, Vim's documentation is installed in <filename
+    <para>By default, vim's documentation is installed in <filename
     class="directory">/usr/share/vim</filename>. The following symlink
     allows the documentation to be accessed via <filename
     class="directory">/usr/share/doc/vim-&vim-version;</filename>, making
@@ -109,10 +103,10 @@ done</userinput></screen>
 <screen><userinput remap="install">ln -sv ../&vim-docdir;/doc /usr/share/doc/vim-&vim-version;</userinput></screen>
 
     <para>If an X Window System is going to be installed on the LFS
-    system, it may be necessary to recompile Vim after installing X. Vim
+    system, it may be necessary to recompile vim after installing X. Vim
     comes with a GUI version of the editor that requires X and some
     additional libraries to be installed. For more information on this
-    process, refer to the Vim documentation and the Vim installation page
+    process, refer to the vim documentation and the vim installation page
     in the BLFS book at <ulink
     url="&blfs-book;postlfs/vim.html"/>.</para>
 
@@ -157,7 +151,7 @@ EOF</userinput></screen>
     vi-compatible manner. Remove the <quote>no</quote> to keep the old
     <command>vi</command> behavior. The <parameter>set backspace=2</parameter>
     setting allows backspacing over line breaks, autoindents, and the start of
-    insert. The <parameter>syntax on</parameter> parameter enables vim's syntax
+    an insert. The <parameter>syntax on</parameter> parameter enables vim's syntax
     highlighting.  The <parameter>set mouse=</parameter> setting enables
     proper pasting of text with the mouse when working in chroot or over a
     remote connection.  Finally, the <emphasis>if</emphasis> statement with the
@@ -165,18 +159,14 @@ EOF</userinput></screen>
     <command>vim</command>'s guess about the background color of some terminal
     emulators. This gives the highlighting a better color scheme for use on the
     black background of these programs.</para>
-<!--
-    <para>Creating an empty <filename>~/.vimrc</filename> prevents vim from
-    overriding settings in <filename>/etc/vimrc</filename> by using
-    <filename>/usr/share/vim/vim80/defaults.vim</filename>.</para>
--->
+
     <para>Documentation for other available options can be obtained by
     running the following command:</para>
 
 <screen role="nodump"><userinput>vim -c ':options'</userinput></screen>
 
     <note>
-      <para>By default, Vim only installs spell files for the English language.
+      <para>By default, vim only installs spell files for the English language.
       To install spell files for your preferred language, download the
       <filename>*.spl</filename> and optionally, the <filename>*.sug</filename>
       files for your language and character encoding from <ulink