Fix some typos and grammar issues reported by Chris Staub in #2307.

git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@8800 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

1 files changed, 10 insertions, 12 deletions

diff --git a/chapter08/grub.xml b/chapter08/grub.xml
index b77d3e285..66a368a1c 100644
--- a/chapter08/grub.xml
+++ b/chapter08/grub.xml
@@ -40,10 +40,15 @@
   <sect2 role="installation">
     <title>Installation of GRUB</title>
 
+    <para>Your shiny new LFS system is almost complete. One of the last
+    things to do is to ensure that the system can be properly booted.</para>
+
     <caution>
       <para>This package will only build for x86 and x86_64 architectures
       containing 32-bit libs. If you chose to build on x86_64 without 32-bit
-      libriaries (no multilib), then you must use LILO instead.</para>
+      libraries (no multilib), then you must use LILO instead. Information on
+      <quote>boot loading</quote> for other architectures should be available in
+      the usual resource-specific locations for those architectures.</para>
     </caution>
 
     <para>This package is known to have issues when its default
@@ -98,12 +103,6 @@ cp -v /usr/lib/grub/i386-pc/stage{1,2} /boot/grub</userinput></screen>
   <sect2 role="configuration">
     <title>Configuring GRUB</title>
 
-    <para>Your shiny new LFS system is almost complete. One of the last
-    things to do is to ensure that the system can be properly booted. The
-    instructions below apply only to computers of IA-32 architecture,
-    meaning mainstream PCs. Information on <quote>boot loading</quote> for
-    other architectures should be available in the usual resource-specific
-    locations for those architectures.</para>
 
     <para>Boot loading can be a complex area, so a few cautionary
     words are in order. Be familiar with the current boot loader and any other
@@ -112,11 +111,10 @@ cp -v /usr/lib/grub/i386-pc/stage{1,2} /boot/grub</userinput></screen>
     <quote>rescue</quote> the computer if the computer becomes
     unusable (un-bootable).</para>
 
-    <para>Earlier, we compiled and installed the GRUB boot loader software
-    in preparation for this step. The procedure involves writing some
-    special GRUB files to specific locations on the hard drive. We highly
-    recommend creating a GRUB boot floppy diskette as a backup. Insert a
-    blank floppy diskette and run the following commands:</para>
+    <para>The procedure involves writing some special GRUB files to specific
+    locations on the hard drive. We highly recommend creating a GRUB boot floppy
+    diskette as a backup. Insert a blank floppy diskette and run the following
+    commands:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>dd if=/boot/grub/stage1 of=/dev/fd0 bs=512 count=1
 dd if=/boot/grub/stage2 of=/dev/fd0 bs=512 seek=1</userinput></screen>