Re-adding HOME to the chroot command, and a few textual shuffles.

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@@ -2,37 +2,42 @@
 <title>What now?</title>
 <?dbhtml filename="whatnow.html" dir="chapter09"?>
 
-<para>We thank you for reading the LFS Book and hope that you've found this
-book useful and worth your time.</para>
+<para>Thank you for reading the LFS Book. We hope that you've found this book
+useful and worth your time.</para>
 
 <para>Now that you have finished installing your LFS system, you may be
-wondering "What now?". In order to answer that question, we have composed a
-list of resources for you.</para>
+wondering what to do next. As an answer to that question we have composed a
+short list of resources:</para>
 
 <itemizedlist>
 <listitem><para>Beyond Linux From Scratch</para>
 
-<para>The Beyond Linux From Scratch book covers installation procedures
-for a wide range of software beyond the scope of the LFS Book. The BLFS
-project can be found at <ulink url="&blfs-root;"/>.</para></listitem>
+<para>If you want extra utilities for your LFS system, there is the Beyond
+Linux From Scratch book for you. It covers the installation procedures of many
+different packages beyond the scope of the LFS book. Among them are
+general libraries, programming languages, graphical desktops, multimedia,
+networking and printing. The BLFS project can be found at
+<ulink url="&blfs-root;"/>.</para></listitem>
 
 <listitem><para>LFS Hints</para>
 
-<para>The LFS Hints are a collection of small, educational documents
-submitted by volunteers in the LFS community. The Hints are available at
-<ulink url="&hints-index;"/>.</para></listitem>
+<para>The LFS Hints are a collection of educational documents, often small,
+submitted by volunteers in the LFS community. They cover subjects ranging from
+dependencies to UTF-8 locales, from optimization to uGlibc, and from cloning to
+TZ. The Hints are available at <ulink url="&hints-index;"/>.</para></listitem>
 
 <listitem><para>Mailing lists</para>
 
-<para>There are several LFS mailing lists you may subscribe to if you are
-in need of help. See <xref linkend="ch-scatter-maillists"/> for more
+<para>There are several LFS mailing lists you may subscribe to if you want to
+help develop the book further, assist others to build their systems, or are in
+need of help yourself. See <ulink url="&lfs-root;mail.html"/> for more
 information.</para></listitem>
 
 <listitem><para>The Linux Documentation Project</para>
 
 <para>The goal of the Linux Documentation Project is to collaborate in
 all of the issues of Linux documentation. The LDP features a large collection
-of HOWTOs, Guides and man pages; it may be found at
+of HOWTOs, Guides and man pages, and can be found at
 <ulink url="&tldp-root;"/>.</para></listitem>
 
 </itemizedlist>