Chapter 11 text updates.

1 files changed, 9 insertions, 12 deletions

diff --git a/chapter11/afterlfs.xml b/chapter11/afterlfs.xml
index 4052ccdd6..743fd2e98 100644
--- a/chapter11/afterlfs.xml
+++ b/chapter11/afterlfs.xml
@@ -52,17 +52,13 @@
      </para>
 
      <para>
-        In addition to the above, there is a set of applications that are
-        suitable for all systems for system management. These applications are
-        all in the BLFS book. Not
-        all packages are needed in all environments. For example
-        <ulink url="&blfs-book;basicnet/dhcpcd.html">dhcpcd</ulink>,
-        is not appropriate for a server and
-        <ulink url="&blfs-book;basicnet/wireless_tools.html">wireless_tools</ulink>,
-        are normally only
-        useful for a laptop system. If you are not sure if a package presented
-        here is needed or not, it can either be installed now or later as the
-        need arises.
+        In addition to the above, there is a set of applications for system
+        management for all kinds of systems. These applications are all in the
+        BLFS book. Not all packages are needed in every environments For
+        example <ulink url="&blfs-book;basicnet/dhcpcd.html">dhcpcd</ulink>, is
+        not normally appropriate for a server and <ulink
+        url="&blfs-book;basicnet/wireless_tools.html">wireless_tools</ulink>,
+        are normally only useful for a laptop system. 
      </para>
 
   </sect2>
@@ -252,7 +248,8 @@ PATH=/bin:/usr/bin:/sbin:/usr/sbin /bin/bash --login'</command></screen>
             <keycap>Alt</keycap>
             <keycap>Fx</keycap>
           </keycombo>
-          combination, where <keycap>Fx</keycap> may be <keycap>F7</keycap>.
+          combination, where <keycap>Fx</keycap> is usually 
+          <keycap>F1</keycap> but may be <keycap>F7</keycap>.
         </para>
       </note>