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| author | Bruce Dubbs <bdubbs@linuxfromscratch.org> | 2022-09-18 16:57:53 -0500 |
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| committer | Bruce Dubbs <bdubbs@linuxfromscratch.org> | 2022-09-18 16:57:53 -0500 |
| commit | 6d60bfc16fbb95a775869900005a8800a6c03f2b (patch) | |
| tree | b346940c1a125f07b301509f59b7ff0eebd42024 /chapter11 | |
| parent | cdc605303bd7317c6755da68150149e67a853383 (diff) | |
Chapter 11 text updates.
Diffstat (limited to 'chapter11')
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter11/afterlfs.xml | 21 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter11/reboot.xml | 6 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter11/theend.xml | 5 |
3 files changed, 14 insertions, 18 deletions
diff --git a/chapter11/afterlfs.xml b/chapter11/afterlfs.xml index 4052ccdd6..743fd2e98 100644 --- a/chapter11/afterlfs.xml +++ b/chapter11/afterlfs.xml @@ -52,17 +52,13 @@ </para> <para> - In addition to the above, there is a set of applications that are - suitable for all systems for system management. These applications are - all in the BLFS book. Not - all packages are needed in all environments. For example - <ulink url="&blfs-book;basicnet/dhcpcd.html">dhcpcd</ulink>, - is not appropriate for a server and - <ulink url="&blfs-book;basicnet/wireless_tools.html">wireless_tools</ulink>, - are normally only - useful for a laptop system. If you are not sure if a package presented - here is needed or not, it can either be installed now or later as the - need arises. + In addition to the above, there is a set of applications for system + management for all kinds of systems. These applications are all in the + BLFS book. Not all packages are needed in every environments For + example <ulink url="&blfs-book;basicnet/dhcpcd.html">dhcpcd</ulink>, is + not normally appropriate for a server and <ulink + url="&blfs-book;basicnet/wireless_tools.html">wireless_tools</ulink>, + are normally only useful for a laptop system. </para> </sect2> @@ -252,7 +248,8 @@ PATH=/bin:/usr/bin:/sbin:/usr/sbin /bin/bash --login'</command></screen> <keycap>Alt</keycap> <keycap>Fx</keycap> </keycombo> - combination, where <keycap>Fx</keycap> may be <keycap>F7</keycap>. + combination, where <keycap>Fx</keycap> is usually + <keycap>F1</keycap> but may be <keycap>F7</keycap>. </para> </note> diff --git a/chapter11/reboot.xml b/chapter11/reboot.xml index 70979a191..5eee6ca5b 100644 --- a/chapter11/reboot.xml +++ b/chapter11/reboot.xml @@ -77,7 +77,7 @@ <listitem> <para> - Finally, a review of the following configuration files + A review of the following configuration files is also appropriate at this point. </para> @@ -122,9 +122,9 @@ umount -v $LFS</userinput></screen> <screen role="nodump"><userinput>umount -v $LFS</userinput></screen> - <para>Now, reboot the system with:</para> + <para>Now, reboot the system.</para> -<screen role="nodump"><userinput>shutdown -r now</userinput></screen> +<!--<screen role="nodump"><userinput>shutdown -r now</userinput></screen>--> <para>Assuming the GRUB boot loader was set up as outlined earlier, the menu is set to boot <emphasis>LFS &version;</emphasis> automatically.</para> diff --git a/chapter11/theend.xml b/chapter11/theend.xml index 8470948a3..6f5e7e401 100644 --- a/chapter11/theend.xml +++ b/chapter11/theend.xml @@ -60,8 +60,7 @@ PRETTY_NAME="Linux From Scratch &version;" VERSION_CODENAME="<your name here>" EOF</userinput></screen> - <para>Be sure to put some sort of customization for the fields - 'DISTRIB_CODENAME' and 'VERSION_CODENAME' to make the system uniquely - yours.</para> + <para>Be sure to customize the fields 'DISTRIB_CODENAME' and + 'VERSION_CODENAME' to make the system uniquely yours.</para> </sect1> |