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| author | Timothy Bauscher <timothy@linuxfromscratch.org> | 2002-09-11 22:22:24 +0000 |
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| committer | Timothy Bauscher <timothy@linuxfromscratch.org> | 2002-09-11 22:22:24 +0000 |
| commit | a22f6e7dfe691534f9daa4de045fbae13299e7b9 (patch) | |
| tree | 309cecc7c0314e5cb3aec3e65e7c20bf25fbfdd9 /preface/organpart2.xml | |
| parent | e9d69fa635a0d7247e2430549cd2794e5e2d5a89 (diff) | |
Grammatic changes to the preface.
git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@2084 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689
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diff --git a/preface/organpart2.xml b/preface/organpart2.xml index de4e82870..1c6382d79 100644 --- a/preface/organpart2.xml +++ b/preface/organpart2.xml @@ -2,10 +2,10 @@ <title>Part II - Installation of the base LFS system</title> <para>Part II guides you through the building and installation of an LFS -system. The finished LFS system will be the core foundation that the rest -of your Linux system will be built on. What you choose to do with your brand -new LFS system will be built and supported by this foundation that we build -in Part II.</para> +system. The resulting LFS system will be the core foundation with which +the rest of your Linux system is built upon. Whatever your system becomes, +it will be built and supported by the foundation that we build in Part +II.</para> </sect2> |