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author | Timothy Bauscher <timothy@linuxfromscratch.org> | 2002-09-20 21:11:28 +0000 |
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committer | Timothy Bauscher <timothy@linuxfromscratch.org> | 2002-09-20 21:11:28 +0000 |
commit | 26e62aa22dcb6ce6b63a5a21b44825ff19b2405e (patch) | |
tree | 019a059bdc24940a10f4571c4d6cf3cd88cfab4c /preface | |
parent | eb7df24002f43d7b8ab45a2868a9dfe345a97551 (diff) |
Removed --enable-threads=posix from static gcc compilation. Fixed changelog and a number of typos.
git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@2121 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689
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-rw-r--r-- | preface/foreword.xml | 2 | ||||
-rw-r--r-- | preface/organization.xml | 6 | ||||
-rw-r--r-- | preface/organpart1.xml | 3 | ||||
-rw-r--r-- | preface/organpart2.xml | 4 | ||||
-rw-r--r-- | preface/organpart3.xml | 2 | ||||
-rw-r--r-- | preface/whoread.xml | 2 |
6 files changed, 9 insertions, 10 deletions
diff --git a/preface/foreword.xml b/preface/foreword.xml index 673e213f5..e034b24fb 100644 --- a/preface/foreword.xml +++ b/preface/foreword.xml @@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ fully satisfied with any of them. I didn't like the arrangement of the bootscripts. I didn't like the way certain programs were configured by default. Much more of that sort of thing bothered me. Finally I realized -that if I wanted full satisfisfaction from my Linux system I would have to +that if I wanted full satisfaction from my Linux system I would have to build my own system from scratch, using only the source code. I resolved not to use pre-compiled packages of any kind, nor CD-ROM or bootdisk that would install some basic utilities. I would use my current Linux system to diff --git a/preface/organization.xml b/preface/organization.xml index a13f6facd..0a41b453f 100644 --- a/preface/organization.xml +++ b/preface/organization.xml @@ -2,10 +2,10 @@ <title>Organization</title> <?dbhtml filename="organization.html" dir="preface"?> -<para>Much of the appendices is integrated into Part II (which enlarges the +<para>Much of the appendices are integrated into Part II (which enlarges the book somewhat). We believe this makes for easier reading. This way, you -don't have to keep referencing an Appendix while you read Part II. That's -a real chore, especially if you're reading the TXT version of this book. +don't have to keep referencing an appendix while you read Part II. That's +a real chore, especially if you're reading the txt version of this book. This book is divided into the following parts:</para> &pf-oz-organpart1; diff --git a/preface/organpart1.xml b/preface/organpart1.xml index 7b6b1ebb2..d8480cdcd 100644 --- a/preface/organpart1.xml +++ b/preface/organpart1.xml @@ -4,8 +4,7 @@ <para>Part I gives general information about the contents of the book (revisions, where to get it, changelog, mailing lists, and other contact information). It also contains suggested readings which discuss a few -important considerations to consider before beginning your LFS -system.</para> +important considerations before beginning your LFS system.</para> </sect2> diff --git a/preface/organpart2.xml b/preface/organpart2.xml index 1c6382d79..ee99b3236 100644 --- a/preface/organpart2.xml +++ b/preface/organpart2.xml @@ -2,8 +2,8 @@ <title>Part II - Installation of the base LFS system</title> <para>Part II guides you through the building and installation of an LFS -system. The resulting LFS system will be the core foundation with which -the rest of your Linux system is built upon. Whatever your system becomes, +system. The resulting LFS system will be the core foundation upon which +the rest of your Linux system is built. Whatever your system becomes, it will be built and supported by the foundation that we build in Part II.</para> diff --git a/preface/organpart3.xml b/preface/organpart3.xml index 4624a5837..ff63d5648 100644 --- a/preface/organpart3.xml +++ b/preface/organpart3.xml @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ <sect2 id="pre-organ3"> <title>Part III - Appendixes</title> -<para>Part III contains various Appendices.</para> +<para>Part III contains various appendices.</para> </sect2> diff --git a/preface/whoread.xml b/preface/whoread.xml index 9821eaf8a..9c69e10b7 100644 --- a/preface/whoread.xml +++ b/preface/whoread.xml @@ -31,7 +31,7 @@ of disk space used. Further stripping could bring that down to 5 MB or less. Try that with a regular distribution.</para> <para>We could compare distributed Linux to a hamburger you buy at a -fast-food restaurant, you have no idea what you are eating. LFS on the +fast-food restaurant - you have no idea what you are eating. LFS, on the other hand, doesn't give you a hamburger, but the recipe to make a hamburger. This allows you to review it, to omit unwanted ingredients, and to add your own ingredients which enhance the flavor of your burger. When you |