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| author | Timothy Bauscher <timothy@linuxfromscratch.org> | 2003-01-13 13:26:45 +0000 |
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| committer | Timothy Bauscher <timothy@linuxfromscratch.org> | 2003-01-13 13:26:45 +0000 |
| commit | 91b45adcd650bca92b7186aaf4230d8d34c85fff (patch) | |
| tree | e0242195463e721f6e492407fb7884533d0d7c9e /preface | |
| parent | b8b390a5c18db7dd7c3d393b24b4e45f9d70f2b2 (diff) | |
Applied Billy's grammatical patch.
git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@2317 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689
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| -rw-r--r-- | preface/whonotread.xml | 2 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | preface/whoread.xml | 2 |
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diff --git a/preface/foreword.xml b/preface/foreword.xml index e034b24fb..ef1665b3b 100644 --- a/preface/foreword.xml +++ b/preface/foreword.xml @@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ the bootscripts. I didn't like the way certain programs were configured by default. Much more of that sort of thing bothered me. Finally I realized that if I wanted full satisfaction from my Linux system I would have to build my own system from scratch, using only the source code. I resolved -not to use pre-compiled packages of any kind, nor CD-ROM or bootdisk that +not to use pre-compiled packages of any kind, nor CD-ROM or boot disk that would install some basic utilities. I would use my current Linux system to develop my own.</para> diff --git a/preface/whonotread.xml b/preface/whonotread.xml index 5b10dce52..7b2ab0962 100644 --- a/preface/whonotread.xml +++ b/preface/whonotread.xml @@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ <para>If you do not wish to build your own Linux system from scratch, then you probably don't want to read this book. Our goal is to build a complete -and useable foundation system. If you only want to know what happens while +and usable foundation system. If you only want to know what happens while your computer boots, then we recommend the <quote>From Power Up To Bash Prompt</quote> HOWTO. The HOWTO builds a bare system which is similar to that of this book, but it focuses strictly on diff --git a/preface/whoread.xml b/preface/whoread.xml index 9c69e10b7..6e3625308 100644 --- a/preface/whoread.xml +++ b/preface/whoread.xml @@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ other hand, doesn't give you a hamburger, but the recipe to make a hamburger. This allows you to review it, to omit unwanted ingredients, and to add your own ingredients which enhance the flavor of your burger. When you are satisfied with the recipe, you go on to preparing it. You make it just -the way you like it: broil it, bake it, deep-fry it, barbeque it, or eat it +the way you like it: broil it, bake it, deep-fry it, barbecue it, or eat it tar-tar (raw).</para> <para>Another analogy that we can use is that of comparing LFS with a |