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authorMatthew Burgess <matthew@linuxfromscratch.org>2010-02-19 20:17:17 +0000
committerMatthew Burgess <matthew@linuxfromscratch.org>2010-02-19 20:17:17 +0000
commit12c82b50732eb20659f09456b7ebd3ac7bbbb41f (patch)
treec5ceffea4308ca3fd6ada302ef329e8a4711efeb /prologue/architecture.xml
parent62a1365f24edcd920b27100ed89dc39498ad8daa (diff)
Fix several grammar mistakes and other typos. Thanks to Jim DeMarco for the report.
git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@9191 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689
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diff --git a/prologue/architecture.xml b/prologue/architecture.xml
index a9160865f..3527d5956 100644
--- a/prologue/architecture.xml
+++ b/prologue/architecture.xml
@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ installation, Ubuntu, Red Hat/Fedora, SuSE, or other distribution that targets
the architecture that you have. Also note that a 32-bit distribution can be
installed and used as a host system on a 64-bit AMD/Intel computer.</para>
-<para>Some other facts about a 64-bit systems need to be added here. When
+<para>Some other facts about 64-bit systems need to be added here. When
compared to a 32-bit system, the sizes of executable programs are slightly
larger and the execution speeds are only slightly faster. For example, in a
test build of LFS-6.5 on a Core2Duo CPU based system, the following statistics
@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@ data that exceeds 4GB, the advantages of a 64-bit system are substantial.</para>
"multi-lib" system requires compiling many applications twice, once for a
32-bit system and once for a 64-bit system. This is not directly supported in
LFS becuase it would interfere with the educational objective of providing the
-instructions needed for a straight forward base Linux system. You can refer to
+instructions needed for a straightforward base Linux system. You can refer to
the <ulink url="http://trac.cross-lfs.org/">Cross Linux From Scratch</ulink>
project for this advanced topic.</para>
@@ -51,11 +51,10 @@ project for this advanced topic.</para>
that cannot currently be built in a "pure" 64-bit system or require specialized
build instructions. Generally, these packages have some embedded 32-bit
specific assembly language instructions that fail when building on a 64-bit
-system. This includes some <ulink
+system. This includes some Xorg drivers from <ulink
url="http://www.linuxfromscratch.org/blfs/view/svn/">Beyond Linux From Scratch
-(BLFS)</ulink> Xorg drivers. Many of these problems can
-be worked around, but may require some specialized procedures or
-patches.</para>
+(BLFS)</ulink>. Many of these problems can be worked around, but may require
+some specialized procedures or patches.</para>
</sect1>