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authorMatthew Burgess <matthew@linuxfromscratch.org>2005-05-12 20:39:00 +0000
committerMatthew Burgess <matthew@linuxfromscratch.org>2005-05-12 20:39:00 +0000
commita86df627670f914d4e75076e4ee99385fa67f4fc (patch)
tree9be01bb5c630f1eb1f491c4aca8a353d780833ec /prologue/audience.xml
parent7979cfcbc13f5d2d3805c0a7cd48a3d02719dec0 (diff)
Minor wording improvements
git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@5316 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689
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@@ -31,10 +31,10 @@ and how programs are installed.</para>
<para>Another benefit of LFS is the ability to create a very compact
Linux system. When installing a regular distribution, one is often
-forced to install several programs which are probably never used.
+forced to include several programs which are probably never used.
These programs waste precious disk space, or worse, CPU cycles. It is
not difficult to build an LFS system of less than 100 megabytes (MB),
-which is substantially smaller compared to most existing setups. Does
+which is substantially smaller when compared to the majority of existing installations. Does
this still sound like a lot of space? A few of us have been working on
creating a very small embedded LFS system. We successfully built a
system that was specialized to run the Apache web server with