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| author | Matthew Burgess <matthew@linuxfromscratch.org> | 2005-05-12 20:39:00 +0000 |
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| committer | Matthew Burgess <matthew@linuxfromscratch.org> | 2005-05-12 20:39:00 +0000 |
| commit | a86df627670f914d4e75076e4ee99385fa67f4fc (patch) | |
| tree | 9be01bb5c630f1eb1f491c4aca8a353d780833ec /prologue | |
| parent | 7979cfcbc13f5d2d3805c0a7cd48a3d02719dec0 (diff) | |
Minor wording improvements
git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@5316 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689
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| -rw-r--r-- | prologue/audience.xml | 4 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | prologue/prerequisites.xml | 2 |
2 files changed, 3 insertions, 3 deletions
diff --git a/prologue/audience.xml b/prologue/audience.xml index b9a1842a1..06da55eed 100644 --- a/prologue/audience.xml +++ b/prologue/audience.xml @@ -31,10 +31,10 @@ and how programs are installed.</para> <para>Another benefit of LFS is the ability to create a very compact Linux system. When installing a regular distribution, one is often -forced to install several programs which are probably never used. +forced to include several programs which are probably never used. These programs waste precious disk space, or worse, CPU cycles. It is not difficult to build an LFS system of less than 100 megabytes (MB), -which is substantially smaller compared to most existing setups. Does +which is substantially smaller when compared to the majority of existing installations. Does this still sound like a lot of space? A few of us have been working on creating a very small embedded LFS system. We successfully built a system that was specialized to run the Apache web server with diff --git a/prologue/prerequisites.xml b/prologue/prerequisites.xml index f72d4b853..abc059fa7 100644 --- a/prologue/prerequisites.xml +++ b/prologue/prerequisites.xml @@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ recommend reading the following HOWTOs:</para> <quote>generic</quote> Unix software distributions under Linux.</para></listitem> <listitem><para>The Linux Users' Guide -<ulink url="http://espc22.murdoch.edu.au/~stewart/guide/guide.html"/></para> +<ulink url="http://www.linuxhq.com/guides/LUG/guide.html"/></para> <para>This guide covers the usage of assorted Linux software.</para></listitem> |