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| -rw-r--r-- | chapter01/changelog.xml | 11 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter01/how.xml | 2 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter05/gcc-pass2.xml | 2 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter06/findutils.xml | 2 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter06/readline.xml | 2 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter06/shadow.xml | 2 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter06/sysklogd.xml | 4 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter06/udev.xml | 2 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter08/kernel.xml | 9 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | general.ent | 4 |
10 files changed, 21 insertions, 19 deletions
diff --git a/chapter01/changelog.xml b/chapter01/changelog.xml index 86d23f696..52f13ec36 100644 --- a/chapter01/changelog.xml +++ b/chapter01/changelog.xml @@ -35,6 +35,17 @@ </itemizedlist> </listitem> --> + + <listitem> + <para>Date</para> + <itemizedlist> + <listitem> + <para>[bdubbs] - Several textual corrections. Thanks to + Chris Staub.</para> + </listitem> + </itemizedlist> + </listitem> + <listitem> <para>July 15, 2006</para> <itemizedlist> diff --git a/chapter01/how.xml b/chapter01/how.xml index 16d565c4e..e77aab35b 100644 --- a/chapter01/how.xml +++ b/chapter01/how.xml @@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ <title>How to Build an LFS System</title> <para>The LFS system will be built by using a previously installed - Linux distribution (such as Debian, Mandrake, Red Hat, or SuSE). This + Linux distribution (such as Debian, Mandriva, Red Hat, or SuSE). This existing Linux system (the host) will be used as a starting point to provide necessary programs, including a compiler, linker, and shell, to build the new system. Select the <quote>development</quote> option diff --git a/chapter05/gcc-pass2.xml b/chapter05/gcc-pass2.xml index 451cd5424..7fc0bb49b 100644 --- a/chapter05/gcc-pass2.xml +++ b/chapter05/gcc-pass2.xml @@ -85,7 +85,7 @@ sed 's/^XCFLAGS =$/& -fomit-frame-pointer/' gcc/Makefile.in.tmp \ > gcc/Makefile.in</userinput></screen> <para>Apply the following patch to change the location of GCC's default - dynamiclinker (typically <filename + dynamic linker (typically <filename class="libraryfile">ld-linux.so.2</filename>):</para> <screen><userinput>patch -Np1 -i ../&gcc-specs-patch;</userinput></screen> diff --git a/chapter06/findutils.xml b/chapter06/findutils.xml index d2a89174d..baa82c191 100644 --- a/chapter06/findutils.xml +++ b/chapter06/findutils.xml @@ -71,7 +71,7 @@ <command>find</command>. As <filename class="directory">/usr</filename> may not be available during the early stages of booting, this program needs to be on the root partition. The <command>updatedb</command> - script also needs to correct an explicit path.</para> + script also needs to be modified to correct an explicit path:</para> <screen><userinput>mv -v /usr/bin/find /bin</userinput> sed -i -e 's/find:=${BINDIR}/find:=\/bin/' /usr/bin/updatedb</screen> diff --git a/chapter06/readline.xml b/chapter06/readline.xml index 9dc0f48e2..39ea3a3b6 100644 --- a/chapter06/readline.xml +++ b/chapter06/readline.xml @@ -86,7 +86,7 @@ sed -i '/{OLDSUFF}/c:' support/shlib-install</userinput></screen> <para>Next, remove the <filename class="extension">.so</filename> files in <filename class="directory">/lib</filename> and relink them into <filename - class="directory">/usr/lib</filename>.</para> + class="directory">/usr/lib</filename>:</para> <screen><userinput>rm -v /lib/lib{readline,history}.so ln -sfv ../../lib/libreadline.so.5 /usr/lib/libreadline.so diff --git a/chapter06/shadow.xml b/chapter06/shadow.xml index 83b8cf53c..861c6ed6d 100644 --- a/chapter06/shadow.xml +++ b/chapter06/shadow.xml @@ -62,7 +62,7 @@ </variablelist> <para>Disable the installation of the <command>groups</command> program - and its man page, as Coreutils provides a better version:</para> + and its man pages, as Coreutils provides a better version:</para> <screen><userinput>sed -i 's/groups$(EXEEXT) //' src/Makefile find man -name Makefile -exec sed -i '/groups/d' {} \;</userinput></screen> diff --git a/chapter06/sysklogd.xml b/chapter06/sysklogd.xml index 095fd087c..87ec2e842 100644 --- a/chapter06/sysklogd.xml +++ b/chapter06/sysklogd.xml @@ -36,13 +36,13 @@ <title>Installation of Sysklogd</title> <para>The following patch fixes various issues, including a problem building - Sysklogd with Linux 2.6 series kernels</para> + Sysklogd with Linux 2.6 series kernels:</para> <screen><userinput>patch -Np1 -i ../&sysklogd-fixes-patch;</userinput></screen> <para>The following patch makes sysklogd treat bytes in the 0x80--0x9f range literally in the messages being logged, instead of replacing them with octal - codes. Unpatched sysklogd would damage messages in the UTF-8 encoding.</para> + codes. Unpatched sysklogd would damage messages in the UTF-8 encoding:</para> <screen><userinput>patch -Np1 -i ../&sysklogd-8bit-patch;</userinput></screen> diff --git a/chapter06/udev.xml b/chapter06/udev.xml index cdd6302eb..516133d31 100644 --- a/chapter06/udev.xml +++ b/chapter06/udev.xml @@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ <title>Installation of Udev</title> <para>The udev-config tarball contains LFS-specific files used to configure - Udev.</para> + Udev. Unpack it into the Udev source directory:</para> <screen><userinput>tar xf ../&udev-config;.tar.bz2</userinput></screen> diff --git a/chapter08/kernel.xml b/chapter08/kernel.xml index 8545dd4dc..afb2df34b 100644 --- a/chapter08/kernel.xml +++ b/chapter08/kernel.xml @@ -76,15 +76,6 @@ configuration menus and create the kernel configuration from scratch.</para> - <note> - <para>NPTL requires the kernel to be compiled with GCC-3.x or later, in - this case &gcc-version;. It is not recommended to compile the kernel with - GCC-2.95.x, as this causes failures in the Glibc test suite. Normally, - this wouldn't be mentioned as LFS doesn't build GCC-2.95.x. Unfortunately, - the kernel documentation is outdated and still claims GCC-2.95.3 is the - recommended compiler.</para> - </note> - <para>Compile the kernel image and modules:</para> <screen><userinput>make</userinput></screen> diff --git a/general.ent b/general.ent index 342cd9572..9d7d4740b 100644 --- a/general.ent +++ b/general.ent @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ <?xml version="1.0" encoding="ISO-8859-1"?> -<!ENTITY version "6.2-pre1"> -<!ENTITY releasedate "July 16, 2006"> +<!ENTITY version "6.2-pre2"> +<!ENTITY releasedate "July 19, 2006"> <!ENTITY milestone "6.2"> <!ENTITY generic-version "6.2"> <!-- Use "development", "testing", or "x.y[-pre{x}]" --> |