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| -rw-r--r-- | chapter01/changelog.xml | 4 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter02/chapter02.xml | 3 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter02/hostreqs.xml (renamed from prologue/hostreqs.xml) | 27 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter02/introduction.xml | 7 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | prologue/preface.xml | 1 |
5 files changed, 26 insertions, 16 deletions
diff --git a/chapter01/changelog.xml b/chapter01/changelog.xml index f99e13f6d..2ca396a2c 100644 --- a/chapter01/changelog.xml +++ b/chapter01/changelog.xml @@ -39,6 +39,10 @@ <para>2016-05-16</para> <itemizedlist> <listitem> + <para>[bdubbs] - Moved Host System Requirements to Chapter 2 + and made minor editorial changes.</para> + </listitem> + <listitem> <para>[bdubbs] - Updated to tar-1.29. Fixes <ulink url="&lfs-ticket-root;3932">#3932</ulink>.</para> </listitem> diff --git a/chapter02/chapter02.xml b/chapter02/chapter02.xml index aa62827bb..35d265bb7 100644 --- a/chapter02/chapter02.xml +++ b/chapter02/chapter02.xml @@ -9,9 +9,10 @@ <?dbhtml dir="chapter02"?> <?dbhtml filename="chapter02.html"?> - <title>Preparing a New Partition</title> + <title>Preparing the Host System</title> <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" href="introduction.xml"/> + <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" href="hostreqs.xml"/> <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" href="creatingpartition.xml"/> <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" href="creatingfilesystem.xml"/> <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" href="aboutlfs.xml"/> diff --git a/prologue/hostreqs.xml b/chapter02/hostreqs.xml index c52f81e0f..5e92f8a8b 100644 --- a/prologue/hostreqs.xml +++ b/chapter02/hostreqs.xml @@ -18,8 +18,8 @@ <quote><package-name>-dev</quote>. Be sure to install those if your distribution provides them.</para> - <para>Earlier versions of the listed software packages may work, but has not - been tested.</para> + <para>Earlier versions of the listed software packages may work, but have + not been tested.</para> <itemizedlist spacing="compact"> @@ -143,16 +143,21 @@ </itemizedlist> - <para>Note that the symlinks mentioned above are required to build an LFS - system using the instructions contained within this book. Symlinks that - point to other software (such as dash, mawk, etc.) may work, but are not - tested or supported by the LFS development team, and may require either - deviation from the instructions or additional patches to some - packages.</para> + <important> + <para>Note that the symlinks mentioned above are required to build an LFS + system using the instructions contained within this book. Symlinks that + point to other software (such as dash, mawk, etc.) may work, but are not + tested or supported by the LFS development team, and may require either + deviation from the instructions or additional patches to some + packages.</para> + </important> <!-- Use an empty sect2 element to prevent a pdf warning. --> - <sect2 id="version-check" xreflabel="Section vii, Host System Requirements"> - <title> </title> + <bridgehead renderas="sect2" + id="version-check" + xreflabel="Host System Requirements"> + </bridgehead> + <!--<title> </title>--> <para >To see whether your host system has all the appropriate versions, and the ability to compile programs, run the following:</para> @@ -234,5 +239,5 @@ bash library-check.sh</userinput></screen> or all absent, but not only one or two present.</para> -</sect2> +<!--</sect2>--> </sect1> diff --git a/chapter02/introduction.xml b/chapter02/introduction.xml index 11e4e1883..007bdad8b 100644 --- a/chapter02/introduction.xml +++ b/chapter02/introduction.xml @@ -10,8 +10,9 @@ <title>Introduction</title> - <para>In this chapter, the partition which will host the LFS system is - prepared. We will create the partition itself, create a file system - on it, and mount it.</para> + <para>In this chapter, the host tools needed for building LFS + are checked and, if necessary, installed. Then a partition which will + host the LFS system is prepared. We will create the partition + itself, create a file system on it, and mount it.</para> </sect1> diff --git a/prologue/preface.xml b/prologue/preface.xml index bd2139857..21317757f 100644 --- a/prologue/preface.xml +++ b/prologue/preface.xml @@ -17,7 +17,6 @@ <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" href="standards.xml"/> <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" href="why.xml"/> <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" href="prerequisites.xml"/> - <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" href="hostreqs.xml"/> <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" href="typography.xml"/> <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" href="organization.xml"/> <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" href="errata.xml"/> |