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| -rw-r--r-- | appendixa/glibc-desc.xml | 4 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter06/chroot.xml | 10 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter06/glibc-exp.xml | 2 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter06/glibc-inst.xml | 6 |
4 files changed, 11 insertions, 11 deletions
diff --git a/appendixa/glibc-desc.xml b/appendixa/glibc-desc.xml index 553c683e7..8fa00acb2 100644 --- a/appendixa/glibc-desc.xml +++ b/appendixa/glibc-desc.xml @@ -24,8 +24,8 @@ file. When a program uses a dynamic library, that executable will not contain the code from the C library, but instead a routine that loads the functions from the library at the time the program is run. This means a significant decrease in the file size of a program. The -documentation that comes with the C Library describes this a little deeper, -as it is too complicated to explain here in one or two lines. +documentation that comes with the C Library describes this in more +detail, as it is too complicated to explain here in one or two lines. </para> </sect2> diff --git a/chapter06/chroot.xml b/chapter06/chroot.xml index 212235a10..b5b9c13e8 100644 --- a/chapter06/chroot.xml +++ b/chapter06/chroot.xml @@ -30,17 +30,17 @@ like vim and less to operate properly. <para> Now that we are inside a chroot'ed environment, we can continue to -install all the basic system software. A user has to make sure all the +install all the basic system software. You have to make sure all the following commands in this and following chapters are run from within the -chroot'ed environment. If he ever leaves this environment for a reason -(say when rebooting or something) he has to remember to mount $LFS/proc again -like he did earlier and to re-enter chroot before continuing with the +chroot'ed environment. If you ever leaves this environment for a reason +(say when rebooting or something) please remember to mount $LFS/proc +again like you just did and re-enter chroot before continuing with the book. </para> <para> Note that the bash prompt will contain "I have no name!". This is -normal; Glibc hasn't been installed yet. +normal because Glibc hasn't been installed yet. </para> </sect1> diff --git a/chapter06/glibc-exp.xml b/chapter06/glibc-exp.xml index 0074fea08..c1e854270 100644 --- a/chapter06/glibc-exp.xml +++ b/chapter06/glibc-exp.xml @@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ have Glibc default to using /lib and /usr/lib which is fine right now). </para> <para> -<userinput>--enable-add-ons:</userinput> This enabled the add-ons that +<userinput>--enable-add-ons:</userinput> This enables the add-on that we install with Glibc: linuxthreads </para> diff --git a/chapter06/glibc-inst.xml b/chapter06/glibc-inst.xml index 631fb26da..cd7f8bb56 100644 --- a/chapter06/glibc-inst.xml +++ b/chapter06/glibc-inst.xml @@ -40,9 +40,9 @@ Install Glibc by running the following commands: </literallayout></blockquote> <para> -A user can get rid of the "I have no name!" in the bash prompt if he wants. -This is done by exiting chroot and re-entering it. Run the following -commands to do that: +You can get rid of the "I have no name!" in the bash prompt if you want +to by exiting chroot and re-entering it. Run the following commands to do +that: </para> <blockquote><literallayout> |