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-rw-r--r--chapter05/binutils-pass1-inst.xml6
-rw-r--r--chapter05/gcc-pass1-inst.xml10
2 files changed, 8 insertions, 8 deletions
diff --git a/chapter05/binutils-pass1-inst.xml b/chapter05/binutils-pass1-inst.xml
index 9e02b5f86..bf7da56e8 100644
--- a/chapter05/binutils-pass1-inst.xml
+++ b/chapter05/binutils-pass1-inst.xml
@@ -8,9 +8,9 @@ because both Glibc and GCC perform various tests on the available linker and
assembler to determine which of their own features to enable.</para>
<note><para>Even though Binutils is an important toolchain package, we are not
-going to run the testsuite at this early stage. Firstly, the testsuite
-framework is not yet in place and secondly, the programs from this first pass
-will soon be overwritten by those installed in the second pass.</para></note>
+going to run the testsuite at this early stage. First, the testsuite framework
+is not yet in place and second, the programs from this first pass will soon be
+overwritten by those installed in the second pass.</para></note>
<para>This package is known to behave badly when you have changed its default
optimization flags (including the -march and -mcpu options). Therefore, if
diff --git a/chapter05/gcc-pass1-inst.xml b/chapter05/gcc-pass1-inst.xml
index 5b39c34ea..15c219f51 100644
--- a/chapter05/gcc-pass1-inst.xml
+++ b/chapter05/gcc-pass1-inst.xml
@@ -7,9 +7,9 @@
for the moment.</para>
<note><para>Even though GCC is an important toolchain package, we are not
-going to run the testsuite at this early stage. Firstly, the testsuite
-framework is not yet in place and secondly, the programs from this first pass
-will soon be overwritten by those installed in the second pass.</para></note>
+going to run the testsuite at this early stage. First, the testsuite framework
+is not yet in place and second, the programs from this first pass will soon be
+overwritten by those installed in the second pass.</para></note>
<para>This package is known to behave badly when you have changed its
default optimization flags (including the -march and -mcpu options).
@@ -36,8 +36,8 @@ cd ../gcc-build</userinput></screen></para>
<listitem><para><userinput>--with-local-prefix=/tools</userinput>: The
purpose of this switch is to remove <filename>/usr/local/include</filename>
from <userinput>gcc</userinput>'s include search path. This is not absolutely
-essential, but we want to try and minimize the influence from the host system,
-so this is a sensible thing to do.</para></listitem>
+essential; however, we want to try to minimize the influence of the host
+system, thus making this is a sensible thing to do.</para></listitem>
<listitem><para><userinput>--enable-shared</userinput>: This switch may
seem counter-intuitive at first. But using it allows the building of