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| -rw-r--r-- | chapter01/changelog.xml | 4 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter03/introduction.xml | 2 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter05/perl.xml | 2 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter06/automake.xml | 2 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter06/binutils.xml | 4 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter06/flex.xml | 2 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter06/inetutils.xml | 2 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter06/kmod.xml | 5 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter06/man-pages.xml | 2 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter07/bootscripts.xml | 2 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter08/kernel.xml | 4 |
11 files changed, 17 insertions, 14 deletions
diff --git a/chapter01/changelog.xml b/chapter01/changelog.xml index b944966a5..0f258c86e 100644 --- a/chapter01/changelog.xml +++ b/chapter01/changelog.xml @@ -46,6 +46,10 @@ <para>[Chris] - Corrected the home page for Patch. Fixes <ulink url="&lfs-ticket-root;3621">#3621</ulink>.</para> </listitem> + <listitem> + <para>[Chris] - Various text updates. + Fixes <ulink url="&lfs-ticket-root;3622">#3622</ulink>.</para> + </listitem> </itemizedlist> </listitem> diff --git a/chapter03/introduction.xml b/chapter03/introduction.xml index 98fc93e62..cbe8a31a4 100644 --- a/chapter03/introduction.xml +++ b/chapter03/introduction.xml @@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ <screen role="nodump"><userinput>wget -i wget-list -P $LFS/sources</userinput></screen> <para>Additionally, starting with LFS-7.0, there is a separate file, - <ulink url="../md5sums">md5sums</ulink>, can be used to verify that all + <ulink url="../md5sums">md5sums</ulink>, which can be used to verify that all the correct packages are available before proceeding. Place that file in <filename class="directory">$LFS/sources</filename> and run:</para> diff --git a/chapter05/perl.xml b/chapter05/perl.xml index 401a94d07..cfe79c5ec 100644 --- a/chapter05/perl.xml +++ b/chapter05/perl.xml @@ -61,7 +61,7 @@ <para>Although Perl comes with a test suite, it would be better to wait until it is installed in the next chapter.</para> - <para>Only a few of the utilities and libraries, need to be installed at this + <para>Only a few of the utilities and libraries need to be installed at this time:</para> <screen><userinput remap="install">cp -v perl cpan/podlators/pod2man /tools/bin diff --git a/chapter06/automake.xml b/chapter06/automake.xml index 117f9c48b..c58cf6184 100644 --- a/chapter06/automake.xml +++ b/chapter06/automake.xml @@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ <para>There are a couple of tests that incorrectly link to the wrong version of the flex library, so we temporarily work around the problem. Also, using the -j4 make option speeds up the tests, even on - systems with only one processor due to internal delays in individual + systems with only one processor, due to internal delays in individual tests. To test the results, issue:</para> <screen><userinput remap="test">sed -i "s:./configure:LEXLIB=/usr/lib/libfl.a &:" t/lex-{clean,depend}-cxx.sh diff --git a/chapter06/binutils.xml b/chapter06/binutils.xml index dc3904c9e..e0aefee3f 100644 --- a/chapter06/binutils.xml +++ b/chapter06/binutils.xml @@ -64,8 +64,8 @@ Ask your system administrator to create more.</computeroutput></screen> <screen><userinput remap="pre">rm -fv etc/standards.info sed -i.bak '/^INFO/s/standards.info //' etc/Makefile.in</userinput></screen> - <para>Add an upstream patch to use gcc's link time optimization (LTO) - the default:</para> + <para>Add an upstream patch to use GCC's link time optimization (LTO) + by default:</para> <screen><userinput remap="pre">patch -Np1 -i ../&binutils-lto-patch;</userinput></screen> diff --git a/chapter06/flex.xml b/chapter06/flex.xml index 8ad7040a9..725bc21f8 100644 --- a/chapter06/flex.xml +++ b/chapter06/flex.xml @@ -41,7 +41,7 @@ <sect2 role="installation"> <title>Installation of Flex</title> - <para>First, skip running three regression tests that require bison.</para> + <para>First, skip running three regression tests that require Bison:</para> <screen><userinput remap="pre">sed -i -e '/test-bison/d' tests/Makefile.in</userinput></screen> diff --git a/chapter06/inetutils.xml b/chapter06/inetutils.xml index 639d04da9..7cb9b6b5b 100644 --- a/chapter06/inetutils.xml +++ b/chapter06/inetutils.xml @@ -41,7 +41,7 @@ <title>Installation of Inetutils</title> <para>Create a definition to allow the <command>ifconfig</command> program - to build properly.</para> + to build properly:</para> <screen><userinput remap="pre">echo '#define PATH_PROCNET_DEV "/proc/net/dev"' >> ifconfig/system/linux.h </userinput></screen> diff --git a/chapter06/kmod.xml b/chapter06/kmod.xml index 75fa028a0..cc0549d42 100644 --- a/chapter06/kmod.xml +++ b/chapter06/kmod.xml @@ -78,10 +78,9 @@ <screen><userinput remap="test">make check</userinput></screen> - <para>Install the package, man pages, and create symlinks for + <para>Install the package and man pages, and create symlinks for compatibility with Module-Init-Tools (the package that previously handled - Linux kernel modules). Also make sure that all libraries are in the - correct directory: </para> + Linux kernel modules):</para> <screen><userinput remap="install">make install diff --git a/chapter06/man-pages.xml b/chapter06/man-pages.xml index 11256800c..3d2c52046 100644 --- a/chapter06/man-pages.xml +++ b/chapter06/man-pages.xml @@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ <sect2 role="package"> <title/> - <para>The Man-pages package contains over 1,900 man pages.</para> + <para>The Man-pages package contains over 2,200 man pages.</para> <segmentedlist> <segtitle>&buildtime;</segtitle> diff --git a/chapter07/bootscripts.xml b/chapter07/bootscripts.xml index 0fbb91e1d..76bde3d03 100644 --- a/chapter07/bootscripts.xml +++ b/chapter07/bootscripts.xml @@ -316,7 +316,7 @@ <term><command>udev_retry</command></term> <listitem> <para>Retries failed udev uevents, and copies generated rules - files from to + files from <filename class="directory">/run/udev</filename> to <filename class="directory">/etc/udev/rules.d</filename> if required</para> <indexterm zone="ch-scripts-bootscripts udev-retry-bootscripts"> <primary sortas="d-udev-retry">udev_retry</primary> diff --git a/chapter08/kernel.xml b/chapter08/kernel.xml index 59a3a6f5c..f2e6d7ebe 100644 --- a/chapter08/kernel.xml +++ b/chapter08/kernel.xml @@ -102,7 +102,7 @@ Device Drivers ---> <para>This will create automated device nodes which are populated by the kernel, even without udev running. Udev then runs on top of this, managing permissions and adding symlinks. This configuration - itme is required for all users of udev/eudev. </para> + item is required for all users of Udev/Eudev.</para> </listitem> </varlistentry> @@ -151,7 +151,7 @@ Device Drivers ---> located in <xref linkend="ch-scripts-udev"/> and in the kernel documentation in the <filename class="directory">linux-&linux-version;/Documentation</filename> directory. - Also, <filename>modprobe.conf(5)</filename> may be of interest.</para> + Also, <filename>modprobe.d(5)</filename> may be of interest.</para> <para>Install the modules, if the kernel configuration uses them:</para> |