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| -rw-r--r-- | chapter04/creatingminlayout.xml | 12 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter07/creatingdirs.xml | 10 |
2 files changed, 11 insertions, 11 deletions
diff --git a/chapter04/creatingminlayout.xml b/chapter04/creatingminlayout.xml index cab023a49..90c825577 100644 --- a/chapter04/creatingminlayout.xml +++ b/chapter04/creatingminlayout.xml @@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ <sect1 id="ch-tools-creatingminlayout"> <?dbhtml filename="creatingminlayout.html"?> - <title>Creating a limited directory layout in LFS filesystem</title> + <title>Creating a Limited Directory Layout in the LFS Filesystem</title> <para>In this section, we begin populating the LFS filesystem with the pieces that will constitute the final Linux system. The first step is to @@ -41,13 +41,13 @@ esac</userinput></screen> <note> <para> - LFS editors have deliberately decided not to use a + The LFS editors have deliberately decided not to use a <filename class="directory">/usr/lib64</filename> directory. Several - steps are taken so that the toolchain does not use it. If for any + steps are taken to be sure the toolchain will not use it. If for any reason this directory appears (either because you made an error in - following the instructions, or because you install a binary package that - creates it after finishing LFS), it may break the instructions given in - the book. You should often ensure that this directory is non-existent. + following the instructions, or because you installed a binary package that + created it after finishing LFS), it may break your system. + You should always be sure this directory does not exist. </para> </note> diff --git a/chapter07/creatingdirs.xml b/chapter07/creatingdirs.xml index 0bb75fd5d..e2faa08da 100644 --- a/chapter07/creatingdirs.xml +++ b/chapter07/creatingdirs.xml @@ -70,12 +70,12 @@ install -dv -m 1777 /tmp /var/tmp</userinput></screen> <warning> <para> - The FHS does not enforce the existence of the directory + The FHS does not mandate the existence of the directory <filename class="directory">/usr/lib64</filename>, and the LFS editors - have decided not to use it. For the instructions in LFS and BLFS to work, - it is imperative that this directory be non-existent. You should often - check that it does not exist, because it is easy to inadvertently - create it, which will likely break your system. + have decided not to use it. For the instructions in LFS and BLFS to work correctly, + it is imperative that this directory be non-existent. From time to time you should + verify that it does not exist, because it is easy to create it + inadvertently, and this will probably break your system. </para> </warning> |