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| -rw-r--r-- | appendices/dependencies.xml | 12 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter01/changelog.xml | 4 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter05/gawk.xml | 7 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter05/glibc.xml | 4 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter05/grep.xml | 6 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter06/db.xml | 4 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter06/gcc.xml | 12 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter06/grep.xml | 6 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter06/inetutils.xml | 2 |
9 files changed, 31 insertions, 26 deletions
diff --git a/appendices/dependencies.xml b/appendices/dependencies.xml index 31db25175..90c20c2cb 100644 --- a/appendices/dependencies.xml +++ b/appendices/dependencies.xml @@ -131,7 +131,7 @@ <segtitle>&testsuites;</segtitle> <seglistitem> - <seg>Not run. Requires TCL installed on the final system</seg> + <seg>Not run. Requires Tcl installed on the final system</seg> </seglistitem> </segmentedlist> @@ -362,7 +362,7 @@ <segtitle>&before;</segtitle> <seglistitem> - <seg>Util-Linux</seg> + <seg>Util-linux-ng</seg> </seglistitem> </segmentedlist> @@ -1063,7 +1063,7 @@ <seglistitem> <seg>Bash, GRUB, Inetutils, Less, Procps, Psmisc, Readline, Texinfo, - Util-Linux, and Vim</seg> + Util-linux-ng, and Vim</seg> </seglistitem> </segmentedlist> @@ -1426,8 +1426,8 @@ </seglistitem> </segmentedlist> -<!-- Begin Util-Linux dependency info --> - <bridgehead renderas="sect2" id="util-linux-dep">Util-Linux</bridgehead> +<!-- Begin Util-linux-ng dependency info --> + <bridgehead renderas="sect2" id="util-linux-dep">Util-linux-ng</bridgehead> <segmentedlist> <segtitle>&dependencies;</segtitle> @@ -1505,7 +1505,7 @@ <segtitle>&before;</segtitle> <seglistitem> - <seg>File, Module-Init-Tools, Perl, and Util-Linux</seg> + <seg>File, Module-Init-Tools, Perl, and Util-linux-ng</seg> </seglistitem> </segmentedlist> diff --git a/chapter01/changelog.xml b/chapter01/changelog.xml index 815b83e5d..32a87fe04 100644 --- a/chapter01/changelog.xml +++ b/chapter01/changelog.xml @@ -41,6 +41,10 @@ <para>2009-03-12</para> <itemizedlist> <listitem> + <para>[matthew] - Fix a few typos. Thanks to Chris Staub for the report and + patch. Fixes <ulink url="&lfs-ticket-root;2367">#2367</ulink>.</para> + </listitem> + <listitem> <para>[matthew] - Reword the explanation of the Expect tests in Binutils' instructions to clarify what the expected test output is. Thanks to Chris Staub for the report and patch. Fixes diff --git a/chapter05/gawk.xml b/chapter05/gawk.xml index c79eb72a6..637ee3f61 100644 --- a/chapter05/gawk.xml +++ b/chapter05/gawk.xml @@ -53,9 +53,10 @@ <varlistentry> <term><parameter>ac_cv_func_working_mktime=yes</parameter></term> <listitem> - <para>This parameter bypasses the search for mktime in configure - and uses the version in glibc. This is necessary due to a change in - gcc that has not been incorporated into this package yet.</para> + <para>This parameter bypasses the search for mktime in + <command>configure</command> and uses the version in glibc. This is + necessary due to a change in GCC that has not been incorporated into + this package yet.</para> </listitem> </varlistentry> diff --git a/chapter05/glibc.xml b/chapter05/glibc.xml index f8063f204..428197485 100644 --- a/chapter05/glibc.xml +++ b/chapter05/glibc.xml @@ -121,8 +121,8 @@ esac</userinput></screen> <listitem> <para>The build requires support for forced unwind, but because it is being cross compiled, it cannot auto detect it. Setting this variable - on the command line explicitly tells the configure script that support - is available.</para> + on the command line explicitly tells the + <command>configure</command> script that support is available.</para> </listitem> </varlistentry> <varlistentry> diff --git a/chapter05/grep.xml b/chapter05/grep.xml index 601bc77fb..5a02861b3 100644 --- a/chapter05/grep.xml +++ b/chapter05/grep.xml @@ -65,9 +65,9 @@ <varlistentry> <term><parameter>--without-included-regex</parameter></term> <listitem> - <para>The configure check for glibc's regex library is broken when - building against glibc-2.8. This switch forces the use of glibc's - regex library.</para> + <para>The configure check for Glibc's regex library is broken when + building against Glibc-&glibc-version;. This switch forces the use of + Glibc's regex library.</para> </listitem> </varlistentry> </variablelist> diff --git a/chapter06/db.xml b/chapter06/db.xml index a52d3956a..17c53eaf1 100644 --- a/chapter06/db.xml +++ b/chapter06/db.xml @@ -96,8 +96,8 @@ <screen><userinput remap="make">make</userinput></screen> <para>It is not possible to test the package meaningfully, because - that would involve building TCL bindings. TCL bindings cannot be - built properly now because TCL is linked against Glibc in + that would involve building Tcl bindings. Tcl bindings cannot be + built properly now because Tcl is linked against Glibc in <filename class="directory">/tools</filename>, not against Glibc in <filename class="directory">/usr</filename>.</para> diff --git a/chapter06/gcc.xml b/chapter06/gcc.xml index 8546b670a..77181e12c 100644 --- a/chapter06/gcc.xml +++ b/chapter06/gcc.xml @@ -61,10 +61,10 @@ esac</userinput></screen> <para>The <command>fixincludes</command> script is known to occasionally - erroneously attempt to "fix" the system headers installed so far. As - the headers installed by GCC-&gcc-version; and Glibc-&glibc-version; are known - to not require fixing, issue the following command to prevent the - <command>fixincludes</command> script from running:</para> + erroneously attempt to "fix" the system headers installed so far. + As the headers up to this point are known to not require fixing, + issue the following command to prevent the <command>fixincludes</command> + script from running:</para> <screen><userinput remap="pre">sed -i 's@\./fixinc\.sh@-c true@' gcc/Makefile.in</userinput></screen> @@ -82,8 +82,8 @@ cd ../gcc-build</userinput></screen> --enable-clocale=gnu --enable-languages=c,c++ \ --disable-multilib --disable-bootstrap</userinput></screen> - <para>Note that for other languages, there are some prerequsites that - are not available. See the BLFS Book for instructions on how to + <para>Note that for other languages, there are some prerequisites that + are not available. See the BLFS Book for instructions on how to build all the GCC supported languages.</para> <para>Compile the package:</para> diff --git a/chapter06/grep.xml b/chapter06/grep.xml index d50c37274..977970899 100644 --- a/chapter06/grep.xml +++ b/chapter06/grep.xml @@ -59,9 +59,9 @@ <varlistentry> <term><parameter>--without-included-regex</parameter></term> <listitem> - <para>The configure check for glibc's regex library is broken when - building against glibc-2.8. This switch forces the use of glibc's - regex library.</para> + <para>The configure check for Glibc's regex library is broken when + building against Glibc-&glibc-version;. This switch forces the use + of Glibc's regex library.</para> </listitem> </varlistentry> </variablelist> diff --git a/chapter06/inetutils.xml b/chapter06/inetutils.xml index 80fc9fe3b..8ca2bc4d5 100644 --- a/chapter06/inetutils.xml +++ b/chapter06/inetutils.xml @@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ <sect2 role="installation"> <title>Installation of Inetutils</title> - <para>All programs that come with Inetutils will not be installed. + <para>Not all programs that come with Inetutils will be installed. However, the Inetutils build system will insist on installing all the man pages anyway. The following patch will correct this situation:</para> |