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| -rw-r--r-- | chapter01/alfsdiscuss.xml | 6 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter01/changelog.xml | 31 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter01/contactinfo.xml | 2 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter01/lfsannounce.xml | 4 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter01/lfsdiscuss.xml | 4 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter01/lfssecurity.xml | 2 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter01/maillists.xml | 18 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter01/othermodes.xml | 12 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter01/subscribe.xml | 2 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter01/unsubscribe.xml | 1 |
10 files changed, 42 insertions, 40 deletions
diff --git a/chapter01/alfsdiscuss.xml b/chapter01/alfsdiscuss.xml index 4994c945f..e7f5ffa7c 100644 --- a/chapter01/alfsdiscuss.xml +++ b/chapter01/alfsdiscuss.xml @@ -2,11 +2,11 @@ <title>alfs-discuss</title> <para> -The alfs-discuss list discusses the development of ALFS which stands for -Automated LinuxFromScratch. The goal of this project is to develop an +The alfs-discuss list discusses the development of ALFS, which stands for +Automated Linux From Scratch. The goal of this project is to develop an installation tool that can install an LFS system automatically for you. It's main goal is to speed up compilation by taking away your need to -manually enter the commands to configure, compile and install packages. +manually enter the commands to configure, compile, and install packages. </para> </sect2> diff --git a/chapter01/changelog.xml b/chapter01/changelog.xml index 80a7e9941..cae962a7a 100644 --- a/chapter01/changelog.xml +++ b/chapter01/changelog.xml @@ -2,8 +2,9 @@ <title>Changelog</title> <para> -If, for example, a change is listed for chapter 5 it (usually) means the -same change has been made in the chapters for the other architectures. +If, for example, a change is listed for chapter 5, it (usually) means the +same change has been made in the corresponding chapter for the other +architectures. </para> <para> @@ -23,12 +24,12 @@ page recommends cfdisk over fdisk because it's more stable. <listitem><para> Chapter 4: Changed the wording to make it more general as ext2 no -longer is the only used file system. Reiser for example is often used +longer is the only used file system. Reiserfs, for example, is often used too now. </para></listitem> <listitem><para> -Chapter 5: Added static mawk, texinfo and partially gettext to faciliate +Chapter 5: Added static mawk, texinfo, and partially gettext to faciliate the move of Glibc from Chapter 5 to Chapter 6. </para></listitem> @@ -37,8 +38,8 @@ Chapter 5: Added Makedev to chapter 5. We don't create the device files here, only copy the MAKEDEV script and make a temp copy which will be used to create device files. This second file (MAKEDEV-temp) doesn't contain user names and group names but only user id's and group id's. We -need a few device files to get Glibc installed, but before GLibc is -installed user and group names are not recognized yet; only the numeric +need a few device files to get Glibc installed, but, before Glibc is +installed, user and group names are not recognized yet, only the numeric id's. This requires a slightly modified MAKEDEV script which will be generated by patching the original one. This patching is done here in chapter 5. Also, fixed the explanations on both makedev installations. @@ -50,7 +51,7 @@ su'ed to) user root. </para></listitem> <listitem><para> -Chapter 5: Simplified ln commands +Chapter 5: Simplified ln commands. </para></listitem> <listitem><para> @@ -73,22 +74,22 @@ Chapter 5: Beautified the static link process for mawk. </para></listitem> <listitem><para> -Chapter 5+6: Upgraded from gcc-2.95.2 to gcc-2.95.2.1 +Chapter 5+6: Upgraded gcc-2.95.2 to gcc-2.95.2.1. </para></listitem> <listitem><para> -Chapter 5+6: Moved Glibc from chapter 5 to chapter 6 +Chapter 5+6: Moved Glibc from chapter 5 to chapter 6. </para></listitem> <listitem><para> -Chapter 6: Changed libexecdir=/usr/bin in fileutils to libexecdir=/bin +Chapter 6: Changed libexecdir=/usr/bin in fileutils to libexecdir=/bin. </para></listitem> <listitem><para> -Chapter 6: Updated Glibc installation instructions. 'configparms' file +Chapter 6: Updated Glibc installation instructions. The 'configparms' file creation has been deleted. No need to pick a compiler (either distro's native or the /usr/local/gcc2952/bin/gcc one); we're in chroot -now so we'll use the one we have +now so we'll use the one we have. </para></listitem> <listitem><para> @@ -113,7 +114,7 @@ installation. </para></listitem> <listitem><para> -Chapter 6: When entering chroot the $TERM variable inside chroot is set +Chapter 6: When entering chroot, the $TERM variable inside chroot is set properly. This is accomplished by: chroot ... -i HOME=/root TERM=$TERM ... </para></listitem> @@ -124,12 +125,12 @@ into one line. <listitem><para> Chapter 6: Changed all "rm file && ln -s dest file" into -"ln -sf file" (in glibc, bzip2 and gzip installation). +"ln -sf file" (in glibc, bzip2 and gzip installations). </para></listitem> <listitem><para> Chapter 7: Fixed the delays in the killproc function in the functions -script. Now after kill, first check PIDs, then sleep 2 if needed. More +script. Now, after kill, first check PIDs, then sleep 2 if needed. More details can be read in the comments in the script itself. </para></listitem> diff --git a/chapter01/contactinfo.xml b/chapter01/contactinfo.xml index 172eb2092..f5a6e875c 100644 --- a/chapter01/contactinfo.xml +++ b/chapter01/contactinfo.xml @@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ <para> Direct all your emails to the <ulink url="mailto:lfs-discuss@linuxfromscratch.org">lfs-discuss -</ulink> mailinglist preferably. +</ulink> mailing list preferably. </para> <para> diff --git a/chapter01/lfsannounce.xml b/chapter01/lfsannounce.xml index c82c623a1..92ad5b4e2 100644 --- a/chapter01/lfsannounce.xml +++ b/chapter01/lfsannounce.xml @@ -5,8 +5,8 @@ The lfs-announce list is a moderated list. You can subscribe to it, but you can't post any messages to this list. This list is used to announce new stable releases. If you want to be informed about development -releases as well then you'll have to join the lfs-discuss list. If -you're already on the lfs-discuss list there's little use subscribing to +releases as well, then you'll have to join the lfs-discuss list. If +you're already on the lfs-discuss list, there's little use subscribing to this list as well because everything that is posted to the lfs-announce list will be posted to the lfs-discuss list as well. </para> diff --git a/chapter01/lfsdiscuss.xml b/chapter01/lfsdiscuss.xml index 7fb452038..38ee5262b 100644 --- a/chapter01/lfsdiscuss.xml +++ b/chapter01/lfsdiscuss.xml @@ -2,9 +2,9 @@ <title>lfs-discuss</title> <para> -The lfs-discuss mailinglist discusses matters strictly related to the +The lfs-discuss mailing list discusses matters strictly related to the LFS-BOOK. If you have problems with the book, want to report a bug or -two or have suggestions to improve the book, use this mailinglist. +two, or have suggestions to improve the book, use this mailing list. </para> <para> diff --git a/chapter01/lfssecurity.xml b/chapter01/lfssecurity.xml index 99cb72756..00babb719 100644 --- a/chapter01/lfssecurity.xml +++ b/chapter01/lfssecurity.xml @@ -2,7 +2,7 @@ <title>lfs-security</title> <para> -The lfs-security mailinglist discusses security related matters. If you +The lfs-security mailing list discusses security-related matters. If you have security concerns or have heard about a package used by LFS that has known security problems, you can address that on this list. </para> diff --git a/chapter01/maillists.xml b/chapter01/maillists.xml index 9d0f3a1ae..612253761 100644 --- a/chapter01/maillists.xml +++ b/chapter01/maillists.xml @@ -1,9 +1,9 @@ <sect1 id="ch01-maillists"> -<title>Mailinglists and archives</title> +<title>Mailing lists and archives</title> <para> -The linuxfromscratch.org server is hosting the following public accessible -mailinglists: +The linuxfromscratch.org server is hosting the following publicly accessible +mailing lists: </para> <itemizedlist> @@ -13,7 +13,7 @@ mailinglists: </para></listitem> <listitem><para> - lfs-apps + lfs-apps </para></listitem> <listitem><para> @@ -25,23 +25,23 @@ mailinglists: </para></listitem> <listitem><para> - alfs-discuss + alfs-discuss </para></listitem> <listitem><para> - alfs-docs + alfs-docs </para></listitem> <listitem><para> - alfs-ipc + alfs-ipc </para></listitem> <listitem><para> - alfs-profile + alfs-profile </para></listitem> <listitem><para> - alfs-backend + alfs-backend </para></listitem> </itemizedlist> diff --git a/chapter01/othermodes.xml b/chapter01/othermodes.xml index a5b5b9b2b..13a2a1ffd 100644 --- a/chapter01/othermodes.xml +++ b/chapter01/othermodes.xml @@ -9,7 +9,7 @@ the appropriate commands in the subject headers of the message. </para> <para> -As the name implies the <emphasis>Set command</emphasis> tells you what +As the name implies, the <emphasis>Set command</emphasis> tells you what to write to set a mode. The <emphasis>Unset command</emphasis> tells you what to write to unset a mode. </para> @@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ you what to write to unset a mode. <para> Replace listname in the example subject headers with the listname to which you want to apply the mode to. If you want to set more than one mode (to -the same list or multiple lists) with one email you can do so by writing +the same list or multiple lists) with one email, you can do so by writing junk in the subject header like "hello" and then put the commands in the body of the message instead. </para> @@ -34,16 +34,16 @@ Unset command: <emphasis>unset listname digest</emphasis> <para> All lists have the digest mode available and you can set yourself to -digest mode, after you subscribe to a list. Being in digest mode will +digest mode after you subscribe to a list. Being in digest mode will cause you to stop receiving individual messages as they are posted to the list and instead you will receive one email daily containing all -the messages posted to the list that day. +the messages posted to the list during that day. </para> <para> There is a second digest mode called digest2. When you are set to this mode you will receive the daily digests but you will also continue to -receive the individual messages to the lists are they are posted. To +receive the individual messages to the lists as they are posted. To set yourself to this mode write <emphasis>digest2</emphasis> instead of <emphasis>digest</emphasis> in the subject header. </para> @@ -60,7 +60,7 @@ Unset command: <emphasis>unset listname vacation</emphasis> <para> If you are going to be away for a while or wish to stop receiving -messages from the lists but you don't want to unsubscribe you can set +messages from the lists but you don't want to unsubscribe, you can set yourself to vacation mode. This has the same effect as unsubscribing yourself, but you don't have to go through the unsubscribe process and then later through the subscribe process again. diff --git a/chapter01/subscribe.xml b/chapter01/subscribe.xml index 984b6450b..8a6eb670e 100644 --- a/chapter01/subscribe.xml +++ b/chapter01/subscribe.xml @@ -2,7 +2,7 @@ <title>How to subscribe?</title> <para> -You can subscribe to any of the above mentioned mailinglists by sending +You can subscribe to any of the above-mentioned mailinglists by sending an email to <ulink url="mailto:listar@linuxfromscratch.org"> listar@linuxfromscratch.org</ulink> and write <emphasis>subscribe listname</emphasis> as the subject header of the message. diff --git a/chapter01/unsubscribe.xml b/chapter01/unsubscribe.xml index d999ef029..3588e0d68 100644 --- a/chapter01/unsubscribe.xml +++ b/chapter01/unsubscribe.xml @@ -24,6 +24,7 @@ Subject: hello unsubscribe lfs-discuss unsubscribe lfs-apps unsubscribe alfs-discuss + </literallayout></blockquote> <para> |