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| -rw-r--r-- | chapter01/changelog.xml | 5 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter05/binutils-pass1.xml | 6 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter05/e2fsprogs.xml | 2 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter05/gcc-pass1.xml | 2 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter05/gcc-pass2.xml | 2 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter06/e2fsprogs.xml | 5 |
6 files changed, 14 insertions, 8 deletions
diff --git a/chapter01/changelog.xml b/chapter01/changelog.xml index 34d82eb82..45bcdb113 100644 --- a/chapter01/changelog.xml +++ b/chapter01/changelog.xml @@ -41,6 +41,11 @@ <para>2009-05-23</para> <itemizedlist> <listitem> + <para>[bdubbs] - Various minor text changes. Thanks to Chris + Staub. Fixes + <ulink url="&lfs-ticket-root;2407">#2407</ulink>.</para> + </listitem> + <listitem> <para>[bdubbs] - Change the bootsripts and udev configuration so the rtc is set by udev upon boot. Removed aio device from udev configuration. Fixes diff --git a/chapter05/binutils-pass1.xml b/chapter05/binutils-pass1.xml index eff3eac76..3ab5a3c03 100644 --- a/chapter05/binutils-pass1.xml +++ b/chapter05/binutils-pass1.xml @@ -77,9 +77,9 @@ cd ../binutils-build</userinput></screen> <listitem> <para>Because the machine description in the <envar>LFS_TGT</envar> variable is slightly different than the value returned by the - config.guess script, this switch will tell the configure script to - adjust Binutil's build system for building a cross linker. - </para> + <command>config.guess</command> script, this switch will tell the + <command>configure</command> script to adjust Binutil's build system + for building a cross linker. </para> </listitem> </varlistentry> diff --git a/chapter05/e2fsprogs.xml b/chapter05/e2fsprogs.xml index 38919deb7..43cea7558 100644 --- a/chapter05/e2fsprogs.xml +++ b/chapter05/e2fsprogs.xml @@ -61,7 +61,7 @@ cd build</userinput></screen> <screen><userinput remap="install">make install-libs</userinput></screen> <para>Make the installed static libraries writable so debugging symbols can - be removed later.</para> + be removed later:</para> <screen><userinput remap="install">chmod -v u+w \ /tools/lib/{libblkid,libcom_err,libe2p,libext2fs,libss,libuuid}.a</userinput></screen> diff --git a/chapter05/gcc-pass1.xml b/chapter05/gcc-pass1.xml index 02854618d..25f809931 100644 --- a/chapter05/gcc-pass1.xml +++ b/chapter05/gcc-pass1.xml @@ -45,7 +45,7 @@ <para>GCC now requires the GMP and MPFR packages. As these packages may not be included in your host distribution, they will be built with - GCC.</para> + GCC:</para> <screen><userinput remap="pre">tar -jxf ../mpfr-&mpfr-version;.tar.bz2 mv mpfr-&mpfr-version; mpfr diff --git a/chapter05/gcc-pass2.xml b/chapter05/gcc-pass2.xml index b60c5c00a..bda37ab6c 100644 --- a/chapter05/gcc-pass2.xml +++ b/chapter05/gcc-pass2.xml @@ -115,7 +115,7 @@ done</userinput></screen> changes to the original files in case the command is inadvertently run twice. </para> - <para>On x86_64, unsetting the multlib spec for GCC ensures that it + <para>On x86_64, unsetting the multilib spec for GCC ensures that it won't attempt to link against libraries on the host:</para> <screen><userinput remap="pre">case $(uname -m) in diff --git a/chapter06/e2fsprogs.xml b/chapter06/e2fsprogs.xml index c22f26243..4e2e39eea 100644 --- a/chapter06/e2fsprogs.xml +++ b/chapter06/e2fsprogs.xml @@ -25,8 +25,9 @@ <para>The E2fsprogs package contains the utilities for handling the <systemitem class="filesystem">ext2</systemitem> file system. It also - supports the <systemitem class="filesystem">ext3</systemitem> journaling - file system.</para> + supports the <systemitem class="filesystem">ext3</systemitem> and + <systemitem class="filesystem">ext4</systemitem> journaling + file systems.</para> <segmentedlist> <segtitle>&buildtime;</segtitle> |